Topic: Pondering of the Soul
Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 07/19/08 08:45 PM
Pondering of the Soul

Life is but a whisper
An open grave in ground
We hover one foot over
And hope never to fall down.

We rarely see it comming
Like a sudden spark at night
All at once there's clarity
Then we stumble in our might.

The moments that we live
Are just pictures in a frame,
Looking back we realize
What for we are blamed.

We climb the steepest mountains
And brave the frozen wastes
Yet we find we're nothing
When it comes to being great.

excerpt from diaries of the necromancer
by Fadedspirit.

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Sat 07/19/08 08:46 PM
flowerforyou

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Sat 07/19/08 08:48 PM

Pondering of the Soul

Life is but a whisper
An open grave in ground
We hover one foot over
And hope never to fall down.

We rarely see it comming
Like a sudden spark at night
All at once there's clarity
Then we stumble in our might.

The moments that we live
Are just pictures in a frame,
Looking back we realize
What for we are blamed.

We climb the steepest mountains
And brave the frozen wastes
Yet we find we're nothing
When it comes to being great.

excerpt from diaries of the necromancer
by Fadedspirit.


drinker Great write! drinker

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Sat 07/19/08 09:01 PM
drinker :smile: drinker

writteninstone's photo
Sat 07/19/08 09:35 PM
my soul felt a little bitter, and lonely this go around. Hopefully I can pull myself up and work towards some akward meaning for where it was suppose to work for the Good...

I like your write..

TaB

writteninstone's photo
Sat 07/19/08 09:35 PM
Edited by writteninstone on Sat 07/19/08 09:35 PM

mteagle31's photo
Sun 07/20/08 07:49 AM
Well done my old friend! Good 2 see you back!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 07/20/08 07:58 AM
Necromancers dancing with small deaths - have missed ur thoughts.....

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 07/20/08 09:10 AM
{{{{FADE}}}}

Oh sorry, did'nt mean to knock you over! :wink:

Just so good to see you again friend!

Welcome home! flowers flowers

LAMom's photo
Sun 07/20/08 08:37 PM
((((( Faded ))))))

Soooooooooooooooooooooo good to see you,,


Awesome Write flowerforyou :heart:

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 07/22/08 10:06 AM
Wow, thank you all for your replies. Just to update y'all a bit, I'm still working weird hours and hoping they'll end soon so I can get back to writing more and being around my friends here.

writteninstone though I haven't met ya yet, thank you much and welcome to our little corner of the poetry world. Keep your head up and your heart fresh.

mteagle, Thanks my friend. It's good to see you too.

DKW, awww, thanks...I've missed being around too.

((((((MsTeddyBear!)))))) Ya almost stepped on me....lol...it's ok darlin, it's good to see you too....hee hee

Awww thanks ((((LAMom)))) good to see you too hun. :smile: flowerforyou



flame1cutie's photo
Tue 07/22/08 10:16 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

shauna22's photo
Tue 07/29/08 02:58 PM
good as always x