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Topic: LAST RIDE? (Motorcycle poem)
Westernbiker's photo
Fri 03/16/07 09:50 AM
My name is Chuck and my writer's name is Carlos. Spanish for Chuck. I
have been on some poetry sites in the past and learned some things. I
like to keep it simple and easy to understand but I like to touch you
also. Some of my poems will touch in a way you don't like but that's
life. Here is one I hope you enjoy. Comments are greatly appreciated and
I would like to hear what you have to say after reading.
Thanks all!
Chuck
A.K.A.
Carlos
Username: Westernbiker


LAST RIDE?

I swing a leg over,
my trusty steel horse.
I plant my butt in the saddle
and point her head north.

A month on the road
and no schedule for me.
I'm riding where I want
and i'm seeing what I want to see.

A curvy road through the pine trees,
only two lanes wide.
Leaning the bike back an forth,
the feelings hard to describe.

A twist of the throttle
and over the next hill.
I'm laughing out loud,
like a child i'm thrilled.

Down through the valley,
with turns left and right,
still laughing out loud,
I must be a sight.

Braking hard for the next corner,
i'm going way too fast,
lean hard through the apex,
then give it the gas.

Out of the corner,
still laughing out loud,
if you could have seen that one,
you would have been proud.

Sparks fly from the footpeg,
as it drags through the next turn.
Still laughing out loud,
i'm not really concerned.

Just passd a sign,
scenic overlook quarter mile.
Think i'll make that stop
and rest for awhile.

I stand at the edge
and I just have to laugh.
I think to myself,
why the hell are you riding so fast?

The answer comes,
as I mount up again.
The soft sweet voice,
of my soulmate and best friend.

I'M HERE!
i'm here by your side.
I may be in heaven,
but i'm with you when you ride.

Don't be in a hurry to join me,
says this soft voice in my ear.
You must live your life and love again,
you know i'll always be near.

I look up at the sky and yell,
I LOVE YOU!
As I put the bike in gear.
I ride away slowly,
thinking,
God I wish you were here.

by Carlos
Copywrite 2006

Author's Comments:
"BIKERS ARE OF A DIFFERENT BREED, BUT WE HAVE A SOFT SIDE TOO!"

missingyou0619's photo
Fri 03/16/07 09:59 AM
carlos that was an absolutly beautiful poem and im not sure if u have
read my poems about my dad but i can relate to this poem and i thankyou
for bringing this to us

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 03/16/07 10:08 AM
That was absolutely beautiful!
Brought tears to my eyes!
Please share more!
:heart: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 03/16/07 10:53 AM
Awww once again a beautiful poem what a ride it wasdrinker

Westernbiker's photo
Mon 03/19/07 08:39 AM
Thank you ladies! So glad you enjoyed it.
Peace!

LAMom's photo
Mon 03/19/07 02:34 PM
Beautifulflowerforyou :cry: flowerforyou

Westernbiker's photo
Mon 03/19/07 03:52 PM
Thanks LAMOM!
And congrats on finding love, hope it will find me again some day.

LAMom's photo
Mon 03/19/07 03:56 PM
Awwwww, Thank you so much,,, Love will find you...flowerforyou

Marie55's photo
Mon 03/19/07 08:52 PM
Beautiful work Biker.

Westernbiker's photo
Tue 03/20/07 08:16 AM
I hope so LAMOM, it's been almost 7 years.
Thanks Marie, nice pic of you and your son.
Have a blessed day all!

catchme_ifucan's photo
Tue 03/20/07 09:44 AM
Beautiful work! :cry:

Westernbiker's photo
Tue 03/20/07 10:16 AM
catchme, thanks so much! Glad you were touched.
Peace be to you!

no photo
Tue 03/20/07 10:19 AM
Brilliant ... great descriptive dude .... :)

Westernbiker's photo
Tue 03/20/07 10:44 AM
Thanks twotallone! Peace to you!

Thndrghost's photo
Tue 03/20/07 10:51 AM
Very beautiful!!:cry:

Suede's photo
Tue 03/20/07 11:00 AM
Execellente’ Carlos… words of rhyme that tell a story and roll right off
the tongue…very nice

Westernbiker's photo
Tue 03/20/07 02:39 PM
Thndrghost, Suede, Thanks for your time in reading this write, I do
appreciate it, Glad you enjoyed it.
Have a blessed day!

no photo
Tue 03/20/07 02:43 PM
MY HUBBY WHO PASSED OVER LOVED TO RIDE THAT MAKES ME THINK OF HIM ALOT,
IT SAYS IT ALL THATS TRUE. THATS HOW THEY FEEL FOR SURE, GOD BLESS YOU

no photo
Tue 03/20/07 02:43 PM
That was so pretty it gets you in the heart:heart: :cry:

Westernbiker's photo
Tue 03/20/07 04:27 PM
Bettyjean my heart goes out to you for your loss.
Clbowen thanks for stopping by.
Both of you, I appreciate your time spent with me, thanks!
Have a blessed day!

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