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Topic: “Do You See Me?”
TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76391	Thu 08/14/08 12:57 PM
“Do You See Me?” Do you see me standing here? With a heart that is sincere. Did you take the time to look at my face? And see that these arms would embrace. Or did you just look away? Not looking as you turned to walk away. Not even given me a thought. Were you afraid to look and get caught? Were you afraid of what you would see? So instead you turned to flee. Are you so scared? To share your life for you’re not prepared. To give all that you can. For it is not within your plan. So it is easier just to walk away. Here just like you do each day. This way you don’t have to give a part. Of your soul and keep your heart. Are you afraid I will break it? Do you not think my love would be legit? I guess one will never know. How love may go. As Long as they turn and walk away. Maybe one day you will send a message my way. K.L.M 8/14/2008 Humm okay this one came from looking on who viewed me. lol Several seems to look but no one seems to see if ya know what I mean lol.

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Thu 08/14/08 01:05 PM
I see you still got that ROPE IN YOUR HAND!!! Nice one (Tx)

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76391	Thu 08/14/08 01:08 PM
I see you still got that ROPE IN YOUR HAND!!! Nice one (Tx) LMAO, Hey it is a Texas thing ya know lmao heck thought some might like that rope

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 08/14/08 03:29 PM
I see you still got that ROPE IN YOUR HAND!!! Nice one (Tx) LMAO, Hey it is a Texas thing ya know lmao heck thought some might like that rope Shhhhew and NO eagle AZ is NOT close enough lol no bungie cords either!!!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 08/14/08 03:42 PM
ICU! Nice Write!

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Fri 08/15/08 06:26 AM
crystal clear “Do You See Me?” Do you see me standing here? With a heart that is sincere. Did you take the time to look at my face? And see that these arms would embrace. Or did you just look away? Not looking as you turned to walk away. Not even given me a thought. Were you afraid to look and get caught? Were you afraid of what you would see? So instead you turned to flee. Are you so scared? To share your life for you’re not prepared. To give all that you can. For it is not within your plan. So it is easier just to walk away. Here just like you do each day. This way you don’t have to give a part. Of your soul and keep your heart. Are you afraid I will break it? Do you not think my love would be legit? I guess one will never know. How love may go. As Long as they turn and walk away. Maybe one day you will send a message my way. K.L.M 8/14/2008 Humm okay this one came from looking on who viewed me. lol Several seems to look but no one seems to see if ya know what I mean lol.

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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 08/15/08 11:42 AM
We see you, beautiful one

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76391	Fri 08/15/08 12:13 PM
Awww ya are way to kind thank you for being who you are you sure know how to make my day

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Fri 08/15/08 12:28 PM
Gulp that's some powerful message!

ArtisticallySpeaking Joined Thu 07/31/08 Posts: 87	Fri 08/15/08 12:40 PM
Humm okay this one came from looking on who viewed me. lol Several seems to look but no one seems to see if ya know what I mean lol. Courage is a virtue. They don't have it. Patience is a virtue. That's in short supply. You sure haven't missed anyone worth keeping. None of us want someone that won't even try. Hold onto the big smile. I'm learning to.

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Fri 08/15/08 01:11 PM
That was an awsome write TxsGal