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Her journey is hard,
Her eyes fail her, She doesn't need to see, All she needs is a vision. She longs to be set free, But she is trapped, By her self-built walls. She can't escape. Can you save her? Does she matter to you? Her world was built around you. To serve you. Will you give her back her vision? She needs to be strong, To grow wings, And to soar above this. Why grow wings? There is no wind. Why have a vision? There is no plan. Why escape? There is no where to go. ~~~~~~~~~~Feedback guys....... |
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I love it....hope to hear more from you...this is really good
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welcome to the site
keep posting |
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![]() inspired "personal growth" |
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![]() inspired "personal growth" I just read your "Personal Growth" poem....Its amazing. |
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thank you for your poem
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome |
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