Topic: Untitled poem..
shortiemix's photo
Thu 08/21/08 06:53 PM
Her journey is hard,
Her eyes fail her,
She doesn't need to see,
All she needs is a vision.

She longs to be set free,
But she is trapped,
By her self-built walls.
She can't escape.

Can you save her?
Does she matter to you?
Her world was built around you.
To serve you.

Will you give her back her vision?
She needs to be strong,
To grow wings,
And to soar above this.

Why grow wings?
There is no wind.
Why have a vision?
There is no plan.
Why escape?
There is no where to go.

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no photo
Thu 08/21/08 07:10 PM
I love it....hope to hear more from you...this is really goodbigsmile flowerforyou

Etrain's photo
Thu 08/21/08 07:14 PM
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kc0003's photo
Thu 08/21/08 07:21 PM
welcome to the site

keep posting


s1owhand's photo
Thu 08/21/08 07:35 PM
flowerforyou

inspired "personal growth"

shortiemix's photo
Thu 08/21/08 07:48 PM

flowerforyou

inspired "personal growth"


I just read your "Personal Growth" poem....Its amazing.

s1owhand's photo
Thu 08/21/08 07:51 PM
thank you for your poem flowerforyou
and the compliment!

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LAMom's photo
Thu 08/21/08 07:59 PM
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Welcome