Topic: loneliness
isaac_dede's photo
Tue 08/26/08 09:17 PM
Edited by isaac_dede on Tue 08/26/08 09:17 PM
There is a time,
When loneliness seems a crime
When I ponder, why am I alone?
Of these types of thoughts I have been prone
I used to measure myself based on what others think
Now I just write about it, using pen and ink.
Many a night I have stayed up and cried
But all it really took was to look deep inside.
It was then that I realized that I choose my fate
And attitude is about my mind’s state
I realized now that it is all up to me
And now I’m comfortable with myself as company
I get to do all things that I like to do,
Without wondering if it would be fun for them two
The choices are all mine to make,
And I never have to be fake
Or worry of the risks that I want to take
But eventually thoughts of wanting someone to care
With whom all my adventures I want to share
Begin nagging at my heels, like a lost stray
That I know is there to stay
But I try my best to make go away,
And finally for a month or so I succeed
And I’m happy being alone once more I concede
However I know that deep within my core
The thoughts will show themselves once more
And I am stuck in loneliness’s revolving door.


msmyka's photo
Tue 08/26/08 09:19 PM
flowers

Enya's photo
Tue 08/26/08 09:30 PM
geez............I must be the 1 jamming the door..........

isaac_dede's photo
Tue 08/26/08 09:32 PM
Thank you mykaflowerforyou

Enya it seems the door can fit lot's of peopleflowerforyou

crafty_poet's photo
Tue 08/26/08 09:36 PM
Something there is that does not need a revolving door

myanimalcracker's photo
Wed 08/27/08 12:03 AM
Very nice write, Isaac flowerforyou flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Wed 08/27/08 12:14 AM
Good Write! happy drinker

AngelLight's photo
Wed 08/27/08 04:31 AM
Yet the beauty of a revolving door is there is plenty of room for someone to step into it with you :heart:

Nice write isaac!