Topic: You, You, You
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Sat 09/13/08 10:20 PM
You, You, You

You know, you don't
You did, you won't
You dropped the ball
You said you'd call
My heart did fall
Can't have it all

Three strikes your out
So much self doubt
Crushed me so small
Try to walk tall
Some days I hate
Stay up too late
Can't take your bait
Do not trust fate

No more free ride
You know you lied
So sick inside
Part of me died
You had my trust
Wrapped up in lust
Move on I must
My feelings just

Heart feels not well
Your love can't tell
Nor ring my bell
Give up the fight
And know my might
The game is done
We had some fun
Now you did run
Feel life's undone
I will survive
I have my pride

Push all aside
Know it's the end
Can't break, can't bend
My friends will guide
Me to the light
Both day and night
A wond'rous sight
I'll hold on tight
With all my might
It'll be alright

d4tc's photo
Sat 09/13/08 10:31 PM
Very NICE! happy flowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Sat 09/13/08 10:44 PM
sweet! flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sun 09/14/08 04:57 AM
Yes, you have many who will hold and comfort you for as long as you need :heart:

bastet126's photo
Sun 09/14/08 05:23 AM
pkd ~ yes, you have your pride, stand tall. you deserve so much more flowerforyou

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Sun 09/14/08 07:34 AM
to all my friends here- your writing provides comfort, laughs, love and inspiration with a little spice now and then.bigsmile :thumbsup:

d4tcbiggrin flowers
poeticmasterflowers flowers
Angel-you are always there for meflowers flowers :heart:
bastet-thank you for being so kindflowers flowers

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Sun 09/14/08 07:49 AM
:heart: flowerforyou YES, you will!! Wink,lol
Nice write!:heart: :banana:

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Sun 09/14/08 08:47 AM

You, You, You

You know, you don't
You did, you won't
You dropped the ball
You said you'd call
My heart did fall
Can't have it all

Three strikes your out
So much self doubt
Crushed me so small
Try to walk tall
Some days I hate
Stay up too late
Can't take your bait
Do not trust fate

No more free ride
You know you lied
So sick inside
Part of me died
You had my trust
Wrapped up in lust
Move on I must
My feelings just

Heart feels not well
Your love can't tell
Nor ring my bell
Give up the fight
And know my might
The game is done
We had some fun
Now you did run
Feel life's undone
I will survive
I have my pride

Push all aside
Know it's the end
Can't break, can't bend
My friends will guide
Me to the light
Both day and night
A wond'rous sight
I'll hold on tight
With all my might
It'll be alright


<<-----throwing out a lifeline and pulling her in....:heart: