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add newer pic of me tommorrow
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Worst poem ever.
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cant wait
how ru?? |
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Worst poem ever.
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and this would be in the poem section for what reason??
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he's gonna creativly draw up a new pic?
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Worst poem ever.
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add newer pic of me tommorrow
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add newer pic of me tommorrow
Hope this brings you some sorrow.
Ya gotta rhyme in time
or at least write one good line. But pic's to show, just have to go. Come-on Kirk ya havin some beers? Cause this poem just has me in tears.
I shouldn't have said that.
YOU DIDN'T!!!!!!!!!
"Oh", ok......
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add newer pic of me tommorrow
Hope this brings you some sorrow.
Ya gotta rhyme in time
or at least write one good line. But pic's to show, just have to go. Come-on Kirk ya havin some beers? Cause this poem just has me in tears.
I shouldn't have said that.
YOU DIDN'T!!!!!!!!!
"Oh", ok......
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i totally get this man
the "pic" is a euphemism for the internal struggle you have going on in you mind and to the point about tomorrow is nothing short of brilliant in the quest to better ones self in the day to day walk through life just outstanding writing here...or i guess it could mean you are just not happy with your pic but if that is the case this is a really bad poem keep trying though you do show promise...lol
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i totally get this man the "pic" is a euphemism for the internal struggle you have going on in you mind and to the point about tomorrow is nothing short of brilliant in the quest to better ones self in the day to day walk through life just outstanding writing here...or i guess it could mean you are just not happy with your pic but if that is the case this is a really bad poem keep trying though you do show promise...lol
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i totally get this man the "pic" is a euphemism for the internal struggle you have going on in you mind and to the point about tomorrow is nothing short of brilliant in the quest to better ones self in the day to day walk through life just outstanding writing here...or i guess it could mean you are just not happy with your pic but if that is the case this is a really bad poem keep trying though you do show promise...lol
are you spying in my brain kc? I was going with the internal struggle angle too ... the juxtaposition of what was and what is ... mixed up with a little disillusionment and hope ... maybe a touch of angst ...
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i totally get this man the "pic" is a euphemism for the internal struggle you have going on in you mind and to the point about tomorrow is nothing short of brilliant in the quest to better ones self in the day to day walk through life just outstanding writing here...or i guess it could mean you are just not happy with your pic but if that is the case this is a really bad poem keep trying though you do show promise...lol
are you spying in my brain kc? I was going with the internal struggle angle too ... the juxtaposition of what was and what is ... mixed up with a little disillusionment and hope ... maybe a touch of angst ...
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You watch, this guys post will get two pages and I can't get three replies to mine,lol.
lol
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Yay!!
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I'm so excited...that I just can't hide it.
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Hope this brings you some sorrow.
Ya gotta rhyme in time
I shouldn't have said that.
YOU DIDN'T!!!!!!!!!
"Oh", ok......
I was going with the internal struggle angle too ... the juxtaposition of what was and what is ... mixed up with a little disillusionment and hope ... maybe a touch of angst ...