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Topic: sun
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Tue 10/07/08 09:50 AM Edited by jimz on Tue 10/07/08 09:51 AM
sun sun sun i am in a drum drum i am no one one no one rays where rays come from sun sun sun i am coming out of my drum drum oh eyes only see light light all there is still sun sun you are sun

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 10/07/08 09:58 AM
Brilliant....

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 10/07/08 02:35 PM
well done jim

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 10/07/08 03:27 PM
This is like the new Rain Rain Go Away!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 10/07/08 03:48 PM


pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 10/07/08 05:24 PM
makes me want to chant

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Wed 10/08/08 10:18 AM


lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 10/08/08 10:27 AM
Nice write Jim Wnjoy the happy days

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 10/08/08 04:26 PM
"oh eyes only see light light all there is still sun sun you are sun" Eloquent Jimmy

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