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Topic: A poem from my nine year old
Adam_zee_61 Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 48	Wed 04/04/07 11:58 AM
The Marine I'm not in the Army, In not in the Navy Im not in the Airforce, not even the Coast guard I stand in the frontlines, the first to die I hold my gun steady, keep my focus ready I fight in storms, I fight in the sun My only friend would be the gun I follow my orders, and guard the borders, You can just call me the Marine. By Dylan Garrett He will be a good one

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Wed 04/04/07 12:00 PM
Very, very good for nine year old. Hats off to him.

sweetklp40 Joined Tue 01/23/07 Posts: 4498	Wed 04/04/07 12:01 PM
thats great coming from a child.

Hotchikita Joined Tue 02/20/07 Posts: 1794	Wed 04/04/07 12:03 PM
HE IS GOOD.

greeneyedlady42 Joined Wed 07/26/06 Posts: 975	Wed 04/04/07 12:10 PM
Adam that is remarkable writing. WHat a natural. Tell him to keep up the great work!! He gets a thumbs up from me. GEL

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76392	Wed 04/04/07 02:04 PM
Awesome tell him to keep up the good work he is a natural.

marilyn Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 789	Wed 04/04/07 02:06 PM
You must be very proud , he is very good

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 04/04/07 03:28 PM
Adam,,, Your son is incredible,,, Awesome poem I hope he continues to right

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