Topic: Positive outlook
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Tue 11/11/08 04:54 PM
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What is this beauty before me
I Never saw it before today
Life taught me some lessons
I learned to open my eyes

Where was all this rapture
yester-year when i needed it so bad
blinded by myself i ran afraid
to be happy somehow was a fear

This is my new beginning
alone on my own
I can make this change
with my new senses

Take this breath
I know it's my first
tastes so fresh
clean as my new slate

I know now what i was
Missing myself in the dark
I now have my candle lit
Leading the way I'm going forward


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Notes: First Draft

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Tue 11/11/08 04:56 PM
Don't change itbigsmile flowerforyou

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Tue 11/11/08 05:02 PM
Really? The funny this is this was written when i was in a bad mood.

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Tue 11/11/08 05:08 PM

Don't change itbigsmile flowerforyou


Please don't... Its great just like it is.flowerforyou

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Tue 11/11/08 05:10 PM


Don't change itbigsmile flowerforyou


Please don't... Its great just like it is.flowerforyou

Why thank you, thank you both.

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Tue 11/11/08 05:15 PM
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