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RandomX Joined Sat 07/28/07 Posts: 716	Mon 01/19/09 06:10 PM
added ALLOT more info

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Mon 01/19/09 06:12 PM
added ALLOT more info Im aroused

Unknow Joined Sat 12/15/07 Posts: 41170	Mon 01/19/09 06:13 PM
Paragraphs.............

writer_gurl Joined Sat 03/01/08 Posts: 7673	Mon 01/19/09 06:15 PM
added ALLOT more info Im aroused I bet you are

RandomX Joined Sat 07/28/07 Posts: 716	Mon 01/19/09 06:29 PM
true......Paragraphs would be nice

eunice49508 Joined Mon 07/28/08 Posts: 172	Mon 01/19/09 06:32 PM
ALOT not ALLOT added ALLOT more info

eunice49508 Joined Mon 07/28/08 Posts: 172	Mon 01/19/09 06:33 PM
Have to correct myself A LOT (two words) ALOT not ALLOT added ALLOT more info

Unknow Joined Sat 12/15/07 Posts: 41170	Mon 01/19/09 07:03 PM Edited by Unknow on Mon 01/19/09 07:04 PM
true......Paragraphs would be nice They would make your essay a MUCH easier read.

bryguy1972 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 251	Mon 01/19/09 08:11 PM
ALOT not ALLOT added ALLOT more info Actually, it's A LOT not ALOT. Two words.

bryguy1972 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 251	Mon 01/19/09 08:19 PM
Add more pics. Use one of you smiling as your main profile pic. Summarize the six paragraphs you have written into one. Two paragraphs at most. Add what your interest are, things you enjoy doing, etc. Wait to give your life story until the first date. Add a paragraph about what you are looking for in a woman. In the first paragraph, the context in which are you using the word "were" should be "where". Come up with a different title. "Genuinely Nice Guy" is too generic. Create a more upbeat sounding profile. The way it reads now sounds like Gloomsville. My two cents.

mchstiger06 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 373	Mon 01/19/09 08:24 PM
ALOT not ALLOT added ALLOT more info Actually, it's A LOT not ALOT. Two words. ACTUALLY... "a lot" is not the accepted vernacular. "a lot" means a yard or empty spot. lol (i have taken plenty of english classes... just thought i'd throw my two cents in) try using "many"

mchstiger06 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 373	Mon 01/19/09 08:25 PM
suggestions: trim down the details and put more about your personality. you should have some information about the person you're looking for.

bryguy1972 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 251	Mon 01/19/09 08:27 PM Edited by bryguy1972 on Mon 01/19/09 08:36 PM
ALOT not ALLOT added ALLOT more info Actually, it's A LOT not ALOT. Two words. ACTUALLY... "a lot" is not the accepted vernacular. "a lot" means a yard or empty spot. lol (i have taken plenty of english classes... just thought i'd throw my two cents in) try using "many" Webster's has seven definitions of A LOT and one of them is "a considerable quantity or extent". Your definition is correct as well but the correct use is A LOT. http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/a%20lot

quiet_2008 Joined Sat 08/30/08 Posts: 11138	Mon 01/19/09 08:28 PM
what if you gotta lotta of em?

bryguy1972 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 251	Mon 01/19/09 08:36 PM
what if you gotta lotta of em? You mean a lot of allots? You're gonna have to consult mchstiger06 on that one.

mchstiger06 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 373	Mon 01/19/09 08:36 PM
ALOT not ALLOT added ALLOT more info Actually, it's A LOT not ALOT. Two words. ACTUALLY... "a lot" is not the accepted vernacular. "a lot" means a yard or empty spot. lol (i have taken plenty of english classes... just thought i'd throw my two cents in) try using "many" Webster's has seven defintions of A LOT and one of them is "a considerable quantity or extent". Your definition is correct as well but the correct use is A LOT. http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/a%20lot i know it's correct as to merriam's dictionary. it's just not quality english... the dictionary also says "aint" is a word now, too. doesn't meant it sounds good using the word. just my opinion

bryguy1972 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 251	Mon 01/19/09 08:38 PM
i know it's correct as to merriam's dictionary. it's just not quality english... the dictionary also says "aint" is a word now, too. doesn't meant it sounds good using the word. just my opinion You mean we ain't allowed to use a lot no more?

mchstiger06 Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 373	Mon 01/19/09 08:40 PM
i know it's correct as to merriam's dictionary. it's just not quality english... the dictionary also says "aint" is a word now, too. doesn't meant it sounds good using the word. just my opinion You mean we ain't allowed to use a lot no more? i aint got no say on nothin you all use in your english talkin language... haha nah i was just saying what i thought about the situation. we all have our thoughts & opinions.

bryguy1972 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 251	Mon 01/19/09 09:04 PM Edited by bryguy1972 on Mon 01/19/09 09:05 PM
i know it's correct as to merriam's dictionary. it's just not quality english... the dictionary also says "aint" is a word now, too. doesn't meant it sounds good using the word. just my opinion You mean we ain't allowed to use a lot no more? i aint got no say on nothin you all use in your english talkin language... haha nah i was just saying what i thought about the situation. we all have our thoughts & opinions. Just giving you a hard time, mchstiger06.

RandomX Joined Sat 07/28/07 Posts: 716	Mon 01/19/09 09:21 PM
You see thats the Tricky part I am still not sure what i am looking for shame I know but Ill think about it and try to come up with something