Topic: Dying Inside
Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 01/30/09 10:55 AM
Dying Inside

You tell me that you love me
I wonder what is wrong
The look that's in your eyes
Seems to tell a different song.

Sure I gave my heart
As I freely gave my love
Why now all a sudden
Does it not seem enough?

I sit here in my torture
And wait for you each time
You never seem to show
And there's no reason to your rhyme

There's always an excuse
As I take the good with bad
Yet when I think to leave
I keep thinking you'll be back

I wished to speak a while
But like always you're not there
You had to go again
I wonder if you care

It now has been two months
Since I've held you in my arms
My tears have long since dried
As I now see through your charm

I know you have your reasons
As do I my dear
This time no looking back
For my pain outweighs my fear.

fadedspirit 10/31/2008

LAMom's photo
Fri 01/30/09 11:02 AM
:cry: flowers :heart:

directandwrite's photo
Fri 01/30/09 11:05 AM
Aww Faded! flowerforyou

colorado97's photo
Fri 01/30/09 11:19 AM
Beautifully written! brokenheart

Mystique42's photo
Fri 01/30/09 12:51 PM
flowers Another great write! Wishing you the VERY best.

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Fri 01/30/09 05:17 PM
drinker :banana:

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Fri 01/30/09 05:20 PM
faded-what a heartfelt writeflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Fri 01/30/09 05:22 PM
Dude... Excellent write.smokin drinker

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Fri 01/30/09 07:59 PM
If a person takes to long to show you their soul.
Then their not living with-in theirs, wink..

I liked this, but then,,I have LIVED it also..drinker drinker drinker

shauna22's photo
Sun 02/01/09 08:11 AM
flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Sun 02/01/09 11:23 AM
Great Write. bigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 02/01/09 03:37 PM
(((Faded))). flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 02/02/09 03:29 AM
Aww, thanks LAMom happy flowers

Thanks for stopping in directandwrite. happy

Aww, thanks colorado97 and welcome to our lil corner of mingle2. happy

Hee hee thanks Mystique. happy flowers

Thanks 1000111010123. drinker

Aww, thanks pkd.happy flowers

Thanks Up2Us. drinker

Very true iam4u, I'm glad you liked it. drinker

Awww, thanks shauna, good to see ya again. flowers

Thanks d4tc. drinker

Awww, thanks MsTeddyBear! Good to see ya again sweetie. flowers