Topic: Falling...
myanimalcracker's photo
Thu 04/16/09 10:02 AM
a heroine on heroin
like a knife through her bladder she erupted
spilling secrets and loose change
she fell gracefully
knees buckling, eyes widening
with fear of the inevitable
she spilled her mid day coffee
lost her mid day thoughts
she never knew never knew never knew
god was there, inner city hip hop
blaring out the open windows
he was clear and open, opening oven doors
explaining how to give it up gracefully

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 04/16/09 10:07 AM
WOW! Fantastic write! flowerforyou

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Thu 04/16/09 10:07 AM
Such a surprise to see you and your amazing writing return. Welcome home.:heart: flowerforyou flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Thu 04/16/09 10:13 AM
bigsmile how i have missed this flowerforyou

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Thu 04/16/09 10:17 AM
Very Nice flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Thu 04/16/09 05:43 PM
Great write Kat:heart: glad to see your back we all missed you :heart: flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 04/17/09 09:05 PM
nicely done, as always...w/b

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LAMom's photo
Tue 04/21/09 10:40 AM

a heroine on heroin
like a knife through her bladder she erupted
spilling secrets and loose change
she fell gracefully
knees buckling, eyes widening
with fear of the inevitable
she spilled her mid day coffee
lost her mid day thoughts
she never knew never knew never knew
god was there, inner city hip hop
blaring out the open windows
he was clear and open, opening oven doors
explaining how to give it up gracefully


:heart:

Have deeply missed you