Topic: Old Rotten Baloney
brwnkimba's photo
Wed 04/29/09 03:02 PM
Love is found when two need it the most,
but the trick's to notice before it gets really close.
It'll pass you right by, it works shifts in swings.
It's so easily spoiled by the simplest little things.

Could be the way he treats your friends or the songs you hate she sings!
Being bit by the bug has different effects on all living beings.
Some get drug through the mud for being innocent,
while neglect keeps their hearts reeling in malevolence.

Others deal with a lover that chooses to smother them in kisses,
I need yous, and I misses.
One tramps trash is another fools gold.
I've gambled with love but always had to fold.

Can I come in, baby it's cold outside?
I locked my keys in my car and I'm to drunk to drive.
So far as I can see in the future it's Mr. & Mrs. you and I.
Gestures of flirtation taken to a level much more high.

She slammed the door in my face sad no, goodnight and goodbye.
I slept under the truck until my head felt right.
Woke up in the morning with my skull feeling swole, my keys in hand staring up at cops on patrol.

I jumped to my feet and said, "Oh there they are" tried to play it off like I didn't just sleep under my car.
Then she walked out of the house and I started sweating bullets.
This could be a really nasty card if she decides to pull it.

To my surprise she said "About time you got here, you're so late I was getting worried dear".
The rollers moved along she winked and said you owe me.
Sometimes love can stink like really old rotten baloney.

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Wed 04/29/09 03:07 PM
Hey BK.....nice to read you againflowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers Like the new pick too!bigsmile

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 04/29/09 03:09 PM

Love is found when two need it the most,
but the trick's to notice before it gets really close.
It'll pass you right by, it works shifts in swings.
It's so easily spoiled by the simplest little things.

Could be the way he treats your friends or the songs you hate she sings!
Being bit by the bug has different effects on all living beings.
Some get drug through the mud for being innocent,
while neglect keeps their hearts reeling in malevolence.

Others deal with a lover that chooses to smother them in kisses,
I need yous, and I misses.
One tramps trash is another fools gold.
I've gambled with love but always had to fold.

Can I come in, baby it's cold outside?
I locked my keys in my car and I'm to drunk to drive.
So far as I can see in the future it's Mr. & Mrs. you and I.
Gestures of flirtation taken to a level much more high.

She slammed the door in my face sad no, goodnight and goodbye.
I slept under the truck until my head felt right.
Woke up in the morning with my skull feeling swole, my keys in hand staring up at cops on patrol.

I jumped to my feet and said, "Oh there they are" tried to play it off like I didn't just sleep under my car.
Then she walked out of the house and I started sweating bullets.
This could be a really nasty card if she decides to pull it.

To my surprise she said "About time you got here, you're so late I was getting worried dear".
The rollers moved along she winked and said you owe me.
Sometimes love can stink like really old rotten baloney.

flowerforyou

Italy0219's photo
Wed 04/29/09 03:15 PM
The first sentence to that hit home with me, Love is found when two need it most"

SOOO that is why I can't find love, cause I don't need it. !!! flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Wed 04/29/09 08:34 PM
rofl
Can I come in, baby it's cold outside?
I locked my keys in my car and I'm to drunk to drive.
rofl

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Thu 04/30/09 07:15 AM
I hope this didn't happen to youflowerforyou flowerforyou and the ability to put baloney in a poem- priceless.bigsmile

brwnkimba's photo
Thu 04/30/09 08:16 AM
Thank you all so much for the time taken to read my ramblings.
And no pkd1220 just a story, but I'm sure it has happened to someone at sometime.:tongue:

MzEm's photo
Thu 04/30/09 08:37 AM
Very nice write and I loved the ending.

brwnkimba's photo
Thu 04/30/09 12:35 PM
Thank you MzEm:wink:

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Thu 04/30/09 12:38 PM
Very niceflowers

tanyaann's photo
Thu 04/30/09 12:40 PM
I always enjoy reading your writes! Bravo! flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Thu 04/30/09 06:16 PM
Very nice of you to say Tanyaann and thank you as well 2KidsMom.