Topic: Dawn...
directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:29 AM
:heart: Dawn:heart:

Three wishes granted
Genie lamp
With many more to come

Unique we stand
A promise kept
More different now than some

An arrow landed
Cupid's kiss
A feeling calm and known

Your left, my right
Directions made
To where that wind was blown

The purple hue
Cascading light
The sun sets in the west

Yet rises here
Morning light
Forgetting all the rest

This warmth inside
Tiny glow
To melt the midnight dew

Then welcome rain
Puddle splash
My dancing there with you

Fighting those shadows
Darkness gone
Slaying all the bad

Letting it go
Goodbye, past
And loneliness once had

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:30 AM

:heart: Dawn:heart:

Three wishes granted
Genie lamp
With many more to come

Unique we stand
A promise kept
More different now than some

An arrow landed
Cupid's kiss
A feeling calm and known

Your left, my right
Directions made
To where that wind was blown

The purple hue
Cascading light
The sun sets in the west

Yet rises here
Morning light
Forgetting all the rest

This warmth inside
Tiny glow
To melt the midnight dew

Then welcome rain
Puddle splash
My dancing there with you

Fighting those shadows
Darkness gone
Slaying all the bad

Letting it go
Goodbye, past
And loneliness once had
flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:31 AM
Thank you Mirror! flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:38 AM

:heart: Dawn:heart:

Three wishes granted
Genie lamp
With many more to come

Unique we stand
A promise kept
More different now than some

An arrow landed
Cupid's kiss
A feeling calm and known

Your left, my right
Directions made
To where that wind was blown

The purple hue
Cascading light
The sun sets in the west

Yet rises here
Morning light
Forgetting all the rest

This warmth inside
Tiny glow
To melt the midnight dew

Then welcome rain
Puddle splash
My dancing there with you

Fighting those shadows
Darkness gone
Slaying all the bad

Letting it go
Goodbye, past
And loneliness once had

a beautiful minuet

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:39 AM




a beautiful minuet


Thank you and God Bless, Sweetie! I hope you are doing well! flowers

tanyaann's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:40 AM
:heart: Wow! Wonderful Write! (hey that was 3w's laugh)

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:41 AM
:heart:

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:56 AM
Thank you Tanya and Gossip! flowerforyou flowers

BL4766's photo
Thu 06/04/09 09:59 AM
very NICE DAW!flowers

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:19 AM

very NICE DAW!flowers


Thank you, Beckie!! flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:27 AM
Not only do I love this, but can total relate to it as well. Great flow wonderful wording, seems to describe the story wonderfully.
This is a wonderful write DAW keep them comingflowers

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:30 AM

Not only do I love this, but can total relate to it as well. Great flow wonderful wording, seems to describe the story wonderfully.
This is a wonderful write DAW keep them comingflowers



Thank you, Chris. I sooooo will...I have been quite inspired lately! flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:34 AM
the pleasure was all mine I assure youflowers
I can't wait to read the next one


Not only do I love this, but can total relate to it as well. Great flow wonderful wording, seems to describe the story wonderfully.
This is a wonderful write DAW keep them comingflowers



Thank you, Chris. I sooooo will...I have been quite inspired lately! flowerforyou flowerforyou

Silveradogal's photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:35 AM
Beautifully Written (((DAW)))flowerforyou . Keep them coming, I love poetry just can't write it myself! I love reading all others! You did wonderful!
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directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:37 AM

Beautifully Written (((DAW)))flowerforyou . Keep them coming, I love poetry just can't write it myself! I love reading all others! You did wonderful!
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Bless your heart, Linda thank you so much!! flowerforyou flowers

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 10:38 AM

the pleasure was all mine I assure youflowers
I can't wait to read the next one


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Thank you! Hee hee blushing blushing flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Thu 06/04/09 11:00 AM
flowerforyou

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 11:43 AM

flowerforyou


Thank you Mz.Em! flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 06/04/09 02:17 PM
I LOVE this one Sweetie...PERFECTION!bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile

directandwrite's photo
Thu 06/04/09 02:18 PM

I LOVE this one Sweetie...PERFECTION!bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile


Kim, you are too kind! Thank you!! flowers flowers