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Topic: No idea what the title is.
JustAGuy2112's photo
Wed 03/31/10 11:28 PM
Ok. So I've actually come up with a " working title " for the book.

I am thinking I am going to call it " Side World ".

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Thu 04/01/10 03:57 AM
para-real...scared ,,,,,lol,,,cool, side-world!!!!!drinker

JustAGuy2112's photo
Thu 04/01/10 01:05 PM

para-real...scared ,,,,,lol,,,cool, side-world!!!!!drinker


I'll take that to mean that you like it...lol

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Fri 04/02/10 08:50 AM
Hi Justaguy,
Thanks for directing me here! I don't have time right now to read more - company due anytime now and I need to finish up a few things...but so far (climbing out of straw) I am really enjoying this and looking forward to reading more!! Company will be here all weekend so it will be a few days till I get back but I will be back to read more. This is very good!!!!

JustAGuy2112's photo
Fri 04/02/10 06:44 PM
Thanks.

I truly appreciate it. :-)

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Tue 04/06/10 03:22 AM
sneaky sneaky.:smile:

lol, I enjoyed it!
The internal Dialogues are probably my favorite thing about it.
Mostly because I do that myself.
...almost to that extent.laugh

I'm also really interested in the creature.
I've got a feeling I'll like her. :smile:

all in all, I'm a sucker for those "bad fantasy novels"laugh

so I'm hooked.

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Tue 04/06/10 10:17 AM

sneaky sneaky.:smile:

lol, I enjoyed it!
The internal Dialogues are probably my favorite thing about it.
Mostly because I do that myself.
...almost to that extent.laugh

I'm also really interested in the creature.
I've got a feeling I'll like her. :smile:

all in all, I'm a sucker for those "bad fantasy novels"laugh

so I'm hooked.



Cool deal.

Glad you liked it. :-)

I'm having a blast writing it.

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Tue 04/06/10 10:23 AM


sneaky sneaky.:smile:

lol, I enjoyed it!
The internal Dialogues are probably my favorite thing about it.
Mostly because I do that myself.
...almost to that extent.laugh

I'm also really interested in the creature.
I've got a feeling I'll like her. :smile:

all in all, I'm a sucker for those "bad fantasy novels"laugh

so I'm hooked.



Cool deal.

Glad you liked it. :-)

I'm having a blast writing it.


If your story is largely character-driven, then the Internal Dialogue mode is an excellent way to define your character more precisely.

It's not the easiest thing in the world to do, but when it's done well (as you've done here), I think it really enhances the story.


JustAGuy2112's photo
Wed 04/07/10 08:42 PM

If your story is largely character-driven, then the Internal Dialogue mode is an excellent way to define your character more precisely.

It's not the easiest thing in the world to do, but when it's done well (as you've done here), I think it really enhances the story.


Thanks, Lex. :-)

I guess one of my main tasks, other than actually finishing the damn thing, is making sure that I don't fall into the trap of using the inner dialogue when I simply don't have anything else to use.

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