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Topic: Acrotic
Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 08/17/09 08:54 AM
Edited by Gossipmpm on Mon 08/17/09 08:55 AM
Hey everyone!:heart:

The Acrotic poem


A simple form of poetry

You put the letters Of any word you choose down the side of the page
Then write from each letter

Example:


Lingering thoughts
Over many a night
Venting feelings
Eventually turns to you


Tammy

From the word love



Now you go!



no photo
Mon 08/17/09 09:20 AM
CHANCES

Choosing a path
Hoping for the
Absolute best
Never say can't
Clearing my mind
Experiences of life
Satisfaction guaranteed

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 08/17/09 11:03 AM

Hey everyone!:heart:

The Acrotic poem


A simple form of poetry

You put the letters Of any word you choose down the side of the page
Then write from each letter

Example:


Lingering thoughts
Over many a night
Venting feelings
Eventually turns to you


Tammy

From the word love



Now you go!



flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 08/17/09 11:04 AM

CHANCES

Choosing a path
Hoping for the
Absolute best
Never say can't
Clearing my mind
Experiences of life
Satisfaction guaranteed
flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 08/17/09 11:36 AM
Do you mean acrostic?

Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 08/17/09 11:48 AM
Do I ?

I was taught the other way!

Does not really matter

Whichever ya like
Whichever it is

To late for me to edit
So you tell
us Ok?

Thanks sweeetie. Your a doll!!

Now toss yours in the mix!!!:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:


Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 08/17/09 11:52 AM
My one solace
In life
Such as it is
That my typos
As
Kreepy as they are sometimes
Eventually
Answers your questions


Tammy
7/17/09


Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 08/17/09 12:07 PM
I'm a detail girl!
' depicting the contraction of
my need to know

absolutely as much as I can find

defining in layman's terms
every thing I can mine
to further my understanding
altering or enhancing my
identification of
that, which I speak
leading me to

google most everything
i question for further
revealing details that may or may not
last in my memory.



From Answers.com:

Dictionary: a·cros·tic (ə-krô'stĭk, ə-krŏs'tĭk) pronunciation

n.

1. A poem or series of lines in which certain letters, usually the first in each line, form a name, motto, or message when read in sequence.
2. See word square.

:wink:

Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 08/17/09 12:11 PM
Thank you baby girl!!

To lazy to google

That's how I had it written from school

Your a sweetheart!!

All my love and thanks again for being a "detail girl". LOL
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

no photo
Mon 08/17/09 12:18 PM
Edited by Terrell87 on Mon 08/17/09 12:23 PM
that was a great comeback. I luved it. Very polite and human like. :thumbsup: @tammy. If only more people can respond 2 critizism like that. Mistakes(lol) thats was wonderful

Flatline's photo
Mon 08/17/09 01:35 PM
"You Smell That?"

Never felt refrigeration
Even bent on termination
Can it ever really last
Rotting still, while breezes pass
Out of light, or underground
Turning dark, then bloodless bound
It's headed straight for dessication
Cause it's just too late for regeneration

DaveyB's photo
Mon 08/17/09 02:24 PM
An acrostic? just tried my hand for the first time the other day.

WRETCHED

With trembling hands she held her son,
Remembering quitely the things he'd done.
Each time he'd defied her every rule.
Taking things not his and playing her the fool
Cheated from life is now his fate
His mother in mourning and sickly state
Eyes filled with tears heart filled with pain
Dying inside, she's silently going insane.

MzEm's photo
Mon 08/17/09 02:26 PM

An acrostic? just tried my hand for the first time the other day.

WRETCHED

With trembling hands she held her son,
Remembering quitely the things he'd done.
Each time he'd defied her every rule.
Taking things not his and playing her the fool
Cheated from life is now his fate
His mother in mourning and sickly state
Eyes filled with tears heart filled with pain
Dying inside, she's silently going insane.


Wow deep Davey very nice.

Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 08/17/09 04:16 PM
Edited by Gossipmpm on Mon 08/17/09 04:17 PM
Pitiful wrench on her knees
A bad excuse of a woman
Insists that you beat her
Needs to feel the love of her master



Tammy

DaveyB's photo
Mon 08/17/09 04:43 PM


An acrostic? just tried my hand for the first time the other day.

WRETCHED

With trembling hands she held her son,
Remembering quitely the things he'd done.
Each time he'd defied her every rule.
Taking things not his and playing her the fool
Cheated from life is now his fate
His mother in mourning and sickly state
Eyes filled with tears heart filled with pain
Dying inside, she's silently going insane.


Wow deep Davey very nice.


Thank you :smile:

Flatline's photo
Mon 08/17/09 04:55 PM

Pitiful wrench on her knees
A bad excuse of a woman
Insists that you beat her
Needs to feel the love of her master



Tammy
laugh laugh ("collar" Smiley here)

Thanks for your good ideas, candor, and graciousness, however you spell it, always fun and appreciated.
Flat


Flatline's photo
Mon 08/17/09 05:37 PM
Succulent veins of snout and toe
Pink all over and ready to go
A favorite of the Aussie table
Monty Pythons' sing-song fable

Jess642's photo
Mon 08/17/09 06:09 PM



P unishing thoughts induce self doubt
E ver increasing losing battles
R ecriminations shouting loudly
F alse E xistence A ppearing R eal
E nveloping illusion to misdirect
C orrupted logic breeding pain
T ortured monologues incites insanity
I ndulgent facades reeking havoc
O pposing impressions detroying truth
N arcissistic madness draining purpose.


PERFECTION = FEAR.

bigsmile


Flatline's photo
Mon 08/17/09 06:21 PM




P unishing thoughts induce self doubt
E ver increasing losing battles
R ecriminations shouting loudly
F alse E xistence A ppearing R eal
E nveloping illusion to misdirect
C orrupted logic breeding pain
T ortured monologues incites insanity
I ndulgent facades reeking havoc
O pposing impressions detroying truth
N arcissistic madness draining purpose.


PERFECTION = FEAR.

bigsmile


(thumbs-up Smiley here)
That was excellent Jess, thanks. It's always comforting to know something thinks like I do. Except for the "R" because I live alone so I have to listen to Rush Limbaugh, or Michael Savage for that.

Flat



Jess642's photo
Mon 08/17/09 06:26 PM




(thumbs-up Smiley here)
That was excellent Jess, thanks. It's always comforting to know something thinks like I do. Except for the "R" because I live alone so I have to listen to Rush Limbaugh, or Michael Savage for that.

Flat





Ahhh but Flat...SELF recriminations shout the loudest???? No ???:wink:

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