Topic: i thank god she was the one
d4tc's photo
Sun 08/23/09 10:12 AM



As I held her hand
it felt real good

laying in her bed
talking about life

the present from
past to future
through time

I looked in her

eyes as she smiled
as we laid there

I

shivering
tense jaws

talking about
current pains

crying and
holding her
hand tighter

mentally cringed
physically drained


i shared my
bad luck
and visions


she encouraged me
as well as she
nourished me

gave me more
hope

despite being
broke

from a sour
heart

i laid there
on my side one
hand holding up
my head

she doing the same
facing me
comforting me

I turned on my back
to smother
the shakyness

as she rubbed my
back with her
free hand

I felt gifted
by this

thanking her
for being
so patient
with me

she smiled
and the words
she didnt say

were written
on
her face

reading through
emotions face

to face

feeling less
shakey and more
calm

thanking god
she is my mom



Gossipmpm's photo
Sun 08/23/09 10:15 AM
Wow

That was a deep and exotic way to honor your mom

I loved it!!!:heart:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 08/23/09 01:58 PM
Most excellent write!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 08/23/09 05:32 PM
:heart: Nice tribute write {{{d4tc}}} flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:26 AM
what a wonderful tributeflowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:29 AM
I must admit while I was reading this my mind was on a lover but the end brought the biggest smile to my face there is no better love then that from a mother.................bigsmile

MzEm's photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:30 AM
This is a super write...Lovely work.

LAMom's photo
Mon 08/24/09 09:37 AM
:heart: J :heart:

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 08/24/09 02:14 PM
:heart:BEAUTIFUL (((J))):heart

ma_thompson's photo
Mon 08/24/09 02:19 PM
drinker To the love of moms..drinker