Ok, I'm new to this online dating thing. This is my first shot in a long time, and I think I didn't do that good a job. So can anyone tell me EXACTLY what I need to improve on? Any and all input is greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!

Maybe some more pictures ,,,,,,,,

Ok more pics

there you go

i only have eyes for you....jk looks ok to me

HI

I would get a pic of you smiling to use as your main. The main pic is your gateway to profile views.

You have a good start on your essay. Consider elaborating on the hobbies that you enjoy. The sentence or two about walks on the beach and BBQ'ing is on every profile on every dating site. Say something different!

You want to stand out above the thousands of profiles, right? How can you do that? Write about something that will inspire conversation and add more pix that reach out from the computer and compel the ladies to contact you!

Enjoy!