Topic: “It’s a Sad World”
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Mon 11/09/09 09:08 PM



“It’s a Sad World”

Take a look and look all around.
It seems that this world is being taken down.
No one believes that love is to share.
No longer do they seem to even care.

What has happened in this day and time?
It seems to love another is but a crime.
I have sat back and watched day after day.
This thing called hate is coming our way.

No matter what we do it seems to stay.
What do we need to do to make it go away?
I see when others freely give their heart.
Just to have another tear it apart.

I do not understand what has happened anymore.
Or how much more can there be in store.
Is there a story that must be told?
Have we all become so cold?

We no longer have a heart nor do we care.
Are we that far gone and unaware.
We need to look around us and see.
How lonely without love this world will be.


K.L.M
11/9/2009



silentmonolith's photo
Mon 11/09/09 09:12 PM
Very beautifully written.

Ladylid2012's photo
Mon 11/09/09 09:33 PM
wonderful Kristi...thanks youflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 11/09/09 09:45 PM

Very beautifully written.


Thank you for your kind words bigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 11/09/09 09:45 PM

wonderful Kristi...thanks youflowerforyou


No thank you for reading flowerforyou

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Mon 11/09/09 09:50 PM
Edited by iam4u on Mon 11/09/09 09:51 PM
:heart: I feel the box we use to have ta step out of to see the real world,,,,,NOW engulfs our boundaries to high, to climb out......

A wonderful piece, and truth,,and if only the WORLD could not for one day,,,STOP and read this and explore the multitudes of discoveries they could find....to just see and feel,,,each other.
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pkh's photo
Wed 11/11/09 10:59 AM
Another beautiful write,nice to see you here

MzEm's photo
Wed 11/11/09 11:03 AM
Simply wonderful! Beautiful....

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Wed 11/11/09 11:06 AM
drinker flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 11/11/09 06:49 PM

:heart: I feel the box we use to have ta step out of to see the real world,,,,,NOW engulfs our boundaries to high, to climb out......

A wonderful piece, and truth,,and if only the WORLD could not for one day,,,STOP and read this and explore the multitudes of discoveries they could find....to just see and feel,,,each other.
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:


Thank you for your kind words and reading....bigsmile

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Wed 11/11/09 06:56 PM
very nice Kristiflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 11/11/09 06:57 PM
WOW!flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Thu 11/12/09 01:34 PM




“It’s a Sad World”

Take a look and look all around.
It seems that this world is being taken down.
No one believes that love is to share.
No longer do they seem to even care.

What has happened in this day and time?
It seems to love another is but a crime.
I have sat back and watched day after day.
This thing called hate is coming our way.

No matter what we do it seems to stay.
What do we need to do to make it go away?
I see when others freely give their heart.
Just to have another tear it apart.

I do not understand what has happened anymore.
Or how much more can there be in store.
Is there a story that must be told?
Have we all become so cold?

We no longer have a heart nor do we care.
Are we that far gone and unaware.
We need to look around us and see.
How lonely without love this world will be.


K.L.M
11/9/2009





"How lonely without love this world will be."

So true...so reflective...:cry: :thumbsup:

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Thu 11/26/09 04:20 AM
OMG she does again, how true this is she speaks. It is sad and doesn't seem to really have any answers either. Nor does it change. Great poem.