Topic: Truth
Ju1cedup's photo
Mon 12/21/09 06:44 PM
Tranquility transpires with your sweet melody
Casting from all realism, an image unknown,
All tides of passion flow within these closed eyes
As we lay complete together in this barren field

The sky speaks of all beauty and simplicity
Gravity disproved by our lifted hearts
With our hands joined we may lay among the stars
And you’ll find your home in the midst of the angels

The tone of your lips lightens all music
If only I could sleep to the sound of your voice
The sunset would be golden as the tint of your skin
And the night would last forever

So speak to the fields of passion, bellow your saccharine euphony
And let us rise above

kc0003's photo
Mon 12/21/09 07:17 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Mon 12/21/09 07:17 PM
saccharine? didn't that cause cancer?
hummm...interesting choice of words


oh, i forgot....welcome drinker

Ju1cedup's photo
Mon 12/21/09 07:19 PM
ehmmm yea use the adjective, not the noun haha

the adj means extremely sweet

the noun was a artificial sugar that may cause cancer haha

Sharris's photo
Mon 12/21/09 07:21 PM
we welcome..you

Ju1cedup's photo
Mon 12/21/09 07:22 PM
thank u:)

kc0003's photo
Mon 12/21/09 07:36 PM
no, i get it...just thought it was an interesting word choice

that is not always a bad thing...