Topic: At this point in our lifes, there are many stones
Yelm_Redneck's photo
Thu 06/14/07 11:58 PM
Taking away the stones


It has many stones,

Hardened through the years.

They say that if care is taken

The stones will disappear.

Many people question

Many people ask

What is it that is inside

That we might want to see?

It beats to the blood that

Pumps through your veins.

Some say it will take a chisel

Others want to use a drill.

But it really doesn’t matter,

For you see, it’s my will.

The rocks will remain

Until another can see

That it only takes love

For the stones to disappear.

daleray1606's photo
Fri 06/15/07 12:06 AM


Very Good

no photo
Fri 06/15/07 12:10 AM
Yelm, I see you are new to posting in our forums. Please notice that we
have a section for poetry. By posting in the topic-appropriate section,
it helps all of us navigate the forums easier.

Yelm_Redneck's photo
Fri 06/15/07 12:13 AM
well, i went to that forum to post and you know what, it posted to
general discussion. Earlier today i was able to post to the poem
section. tonight it won't let me. hope you can help

no photo
Fri 06/15/07 12:15 AM
Cool! It looks like a bug on JSH, thanks for explaining.

Yelm_Redneck's photo
Fri 06/15/07 12:17 AM
Feels somewhat good that it wasn't me.... thanks for looking into it
Ed