Topic: The Feeling I Hide
David_Stuart's photo
Sun 10/08/06 12:08 PM
The Feeling I Hide



I wish I could say whats on my mind,
But im afraid you wouldnt think its time.

These fellings inside I wish I could hide,
But its hard when its just you on my mind.

I want to show but im afraid,
If I do you will run away.

When I chat with you online,
I try to pretend everthing is fine.

But deep inside of me,
I keep this secret I wish you could see.

I dont know when to tell you,
That the felling is im falling for you.

I dont know how it could be,
I just hope you will understand what I see.

So please dont be mad,
All that will do is make me sad.

So this secret I keep inside,
I hope one day you will be all mine.


David Scotty Stuart

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Wed 10/11/06 11:15 AM
Another good one, I know how it feel, except my part I wasn't chatin'
online... good luck....

herointerupted's photo
Wed 09/24/08 11:26 PM
Clicked on the wrong button to read, sorry, But enjoyed the words. In fact I read somewhere that to turn that type of desire into an aesthetic is a very high level of action, valuable for those around you, though they probably don't understand at all.
Keep writing,

Puffins1958's photo
Wed 09/24/08 11:32 PM
very sweet.....