Topic: Picking Season
Sharris's photo
Fri 10/01/10 01:40 PM

Picking Season

How long
will I stand
waiting
for sweetness
to fall
from the branches?

Poised
arms outstretched
mouth
open
in anticipation.

Will I
stand long?

Easier
it would be
to gather them
from beneath
the canopy.

Shall I
save them
before the ground
breaks
their flesh?

Sweet succulence
will not
bruise
their taste.

Shall I pluck them
pulling their stem
cradle
their goodness
in my hands.

Rounded
smooth
perfection awaiting
to know
my lips.
I cannot stand
forever and wait.

Winter comes.

SadieLu

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/01/10 02:32 PM
ms. sadie, your work falls so gentle on my soul it's almost as if they are friends.
lovely, tender, trusted friends... flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Fri 10/01/10 02:41 PM
Kevin,
thank you. I miss ER..Your tenderness breathes deeply.

kc0003's photo
Fri 10/01/10 02:45 PM
i do as well, i haven't found anywhere else to land as of yet, but still looking...

bgeorge's photo
Fri 10/01/10 03:42 PM
(((sadie))) i love you and your beautiful way of manipulating simple wordsflowerforyou the sweetness falls around us every day i've found

everyone is doing well and grands are growing tall i hope...

bastet126's photo
Fri 10/01/10 04:00 PM
your words have always danced across the page, leaving me in quiet anticipation of the next....just beautiful flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Fri 10/01/10 05:46 PM
I find I miss you all, the quiet ways that we are drawn so deeply to that place. In many ways, a respite, just to touch again, that is who you are to my soul...thank you, such sweetness

LAMom's photo
Fri 10/01/10 06:03 PM
In a brisk moment I felt the whisper's between the vines

:heart: Sadie:heart: