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haha!!
this is my first attempt, but it's ok to slam me, i can take it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uSwxCjZCi1Y |
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oh come on people, i need the feedback!
especially if it is bad... |
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I have chills. Beautiful, sad and hopeless chills.
Kevin, I cannot come up with something more eloquent. Stunning. |
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That was really good Bro!
I liked it! 
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its gentle bitter bite was haunting, well done kc!!
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i thought i would give something new a try. thank you guys for taking the time to go and watch. then returning to comment, i appreciate that very much.
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And I hope it is not your Last Time
Chills have taken over,, I felt each and every season,,, Bravo my friend,, the depth and emotion within our voice Ohhhh Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn I am out of words Moving 
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This takes poetry to a whole new level one that I enjoyed very much. It brings a different meaning to the words written... very good Kevin....
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thank you both....it's kind of an experiment, still playing with the idea...
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wow KC (Mr.psychologist) that was a great job ..uhhhmmm kind of deep but I can still got the main message LOL..
 some more...some more
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 very cool man! i liked it alot! |
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I thought that was very, very powerful. I loved hearing you read your own poetry. Brought it to life.
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tess...thank you, i'll think about more...lol
J...i appreciate the look and comment Rhea...i couldn't get Morgan Freeman, so i had to work with what i have... 
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will you marry me?
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will you marry me? best offer i've had all year! oh wait, only offer i've had... 
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i liked the background color and script and pacing
and it is fun to hear your voice i imagine a background of scrolling leaves like a videocamera being carried across a vast expanse of multicolored leaves on the ground leaves on grass thanks for working it up and recording this. makes me want to do the same for mine some day perhaps very nice kc what a pleasant surprise this evening |
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you know why
i thought it was good although it did not make me happy to think of her again her voice somewhat faded now in memory yet the remnant reproduction quite indelible this cannot be fall i muse nor winter nor spring far too cold for summer her scent muted here frozen on ice wondering when she wonders pondering playful epithets cold days under blankets with tea she sips sepia tincture quiet becoming i dedicate this of myself to her |
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i liked the background color and script and pacing and it is fun to hear your voice i imagine a background of scrolling leaves like a videocamera being carried across a vast expanse of multicolored leaves on the ground leaves on grass thanks for working it up and recording this. makes me want to do the same for mine some day perhaps very nice kc what a pleasant surprise this evening thank you H i thought about leaves as well, but walking precedes running...and i haven't yet mastered trotting... |
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i liked the background color and script and pacing and it is fun to hear your voice i imagine a background of scrolling leaves like a videocamera being carried across a vast expanse of multicolored leaves on the ground leaves on grass thanks for working it up and recording this. makes me want to do the same for mine some day perhaps very nice kc what a pleasant surprise this evening thank you H i thought about leaves as well, but walking precedes running...and i haven't yet mastered trotting... like the poem it was just the way it makes me feel sll the good ones make you feel...
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Well done my friend.This certainly raises the bar within our sacred forum.As slow mentioned above,I would like to experiment w/ this type of format likewise.A true enhancement of our often mere text words seeking comprehension from the readers.Bravo!kc.Godspeed!Cy;)
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