Topic: is it right?
d4tc's photo
Fri 12/31/10 07:47 PM
im here
on the move

not much to prove

im winning the battle
i thought i would lose

hmm, whats else to do

hmmmmm, the thought
has grew

i
love me
more than me

so you,

i have choosed.

lurchs_sister's photo
Sun 01/02/11 08:55 PM
(((J)))flowerforyou

The only one that can "choose" if it is right or not is you my friend :wink:

Queene123's photo
Sun 01/02/11 09:59 PM

im here
on the move

not much to prove

im winning the battle
i thought i would lose

hmm, whats else to do

hmmmmm, the thought
has grew

i
love me
more than me

so you,

i have choosed.




adding to your poem


the battle is no game
as you see through the light
and nothing you will not loose
as you have grown to see
who has brought you the love
even though it may not be the one
you tend to seek
as remember love can be built
inside and out

no photo
Mon 01/03/11 05:37 AM
smooched smooched smooched flowers

tanyaann's photo
Mon 01/03/11 06:06 AM
flowers

DaveyB's photo
Mon 01/03/11 06:52 PM
Seems like forever since I've read anything of yours. Not sure if that's you or my lack of checking in here LOL, but either way it was worth the wait.

no photo
Mon 01/03/11 06:58 PM
growing is such a great feeling and I enjoyed this write Jbigsmile

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/10/11 01:07 PM
flowers

d4tc's photo
Tue 01/11/11 08:50 AM
THANK YOU ALL for the replies.

and Davey you haven't missed any of my writes. lol! i haven't been nearly as active as i would like to be. i might have posted 5 poems in the last 6 months. which is equivalent to two days worth when i first joined this site almost 3 years ago, wow, 3 years already lol. crazy...


kc0003's photo
Tue 01/11/11 04:09 PM
good to see you around...drinker

ultimatecubsfan65's photo
Sun 01/16/11 06:28 PM
Always a pleasure to read your stuff. Especially like this one!! You always move me! :smile:

Joanie