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Topic: Death questions Life.......
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Mon 09/12/11 12:53 PM


Death questions Life

Intrigued by the plethora of a baby's innocence.
Death gently surreptitiously, steals its next breath.
It holds the hand of a young girl in a speeding car.
Staring wondrously, at her magnanimous spirit.
The car is soon altered into a twisted metal shell.
Death stoops lewdly, by a abandoned homeless
woman on a moonless frigid night.
It caresses her with a everlasting embrace.
Death and Life hold a cognitive dissonance
concerning human life.

Both agree, the beginning of the day is given
but the end of the day is simply not promised.


Poem:
MHS©Copyright 2011




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Mon 09/12/11 12:56 PM
agreed,fantastic readdrinker flowers

d4tc's photo
Mon 09/12/11 03:22 PM
nicely written!

although i confess, it had me yearning for more... :tongue:



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Mon 09/12/11 03:45 PM
Fantastic...

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Mon 09/12/11 11:14 PM
Thanks all....smokin flowerforyou

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Wed 09/14/11 07:26 AM
Up2Us....all true....

teasingbrunette

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Wed 09/14/11 07:32 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 08/05/12 06:45 PM
Bumping up a old write.....smokin

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Mon 08/06/12 12:15 AM
Up2Us . . . I'm trying to find the right words but I can't. I'm speechless. This is truly poetry at its best.

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Mon 08/06/12 11:54 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Mon 08/06/12 11:58 AM

Up2Us . . . I'm trying to find the right words but I can't. I'm speechless. This is truly poetry at its best.
Thanks mig25....that's very kind of you.

With all my tragic writes, one might call me
a poetic ambulance chaser...slaphead laugh :tongue:

No, actually with all the tragedy in the world.
This particular poem came back to mind.

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Tue 08/07/12 04:14 PM
I need to say something, but I agree with Mig, wordS, is what we do, and yet you managed to strip me, great write

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Tue 08/07/12 04:36 PM
Light meets dark, sun meets moon, life meets death...

The Tree Of Life and The Grim Reaper.....

Beauty in opposites, well done friend..flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 08/07/12 05:04 PM
:thumbsup:

laura329's photo
Tue 08/07/12 08:41 PM
What great analogies. you never ur last moment. Thx Up2us. :heart:

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Wed 08/08/12 04:20 PM
Thanks for reading poppashroom, Leigh2154, Cutiepieforyou, and laura329.... flowerforyou smokin

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Mon 08/13/12 02:12 PM
i like how descriptive it was

Uniquely_blessed's photo
Mon 08/13/12 02:12 PM
i like how descriptive it was

bastet126's photo
Mon 08/13/12 07:16 PM
....and yet, it holds no answers. stirring, and
convincingly, true. flowerforyou

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Tue 08/14/12 02:29 AM
Macabre truth, the double edged sword.

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Tue 08/14/12 05:38 PM
Thanks for reading Uniquely_blessed, bastet126, and Ladywind7... flowerforyou

Sometimes between the silence of each heartbeat, many answers can be clearly heard..... smokin

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