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Topic: Crimson
ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 06:21 PM
her finger bled as it traced the wire
crimson falling in slow motion pixels
onto kaleidoscopes of green
beneath the worn fence boards

another time
a land forgotten

just like her


she was somebody
once
a daughter … once
a sister…once
a mother …


once


Drip … drip … drip …


Yellow pansies
Stained pink

Pink
was her favourite colour

and her favourite singer

Pretty pretty please
Don’t you ever ever feel
Like you’re less than
****in perfect


they say that girls
usually take pills

less messy

but she was an artist
all of 15
and her final painting
is Crimson

no photo
Thu 09/15/11 06:39 PM
Sadly seen,,,
as we never hear their words,,,
for their timely departures,,
leave us,,,shattered...:heart:

Very Beautifully written Art..
for her words have now,,
reached out to be read.. flowers

no photo
Thu 09/15/11 08:09 PM
Very deep write.....flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 09/15/11 08:24 PM
awwww, sadly beautiful

keep'em coming...

:heart: flowers

pennyg281's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:15 PM
Beautiful and heart felt.

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:32 PM
(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:38 PM

(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:39 PM


(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!



laugh or I need to work less flowers

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:42 PM
Beautiful said and shown with a picture to this heart:cry:

kc0003's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:42 PM



(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!

laugh or I need to work less flowers

ok, maybe we need to speed up your work clock! bigsmile

no photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:43 PM
Nope,,,I'd say its not just fiction Art,,,for I see her,,,so clearly.
And you know what they say,,
The depth of a true writer is felt not in his fiction, but that in which he brings to life,,for us us see!..:wink: :smile:

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:50 PM

Beautiful said and shown with a picture to this heart:cry:


Thank you so much Vicky flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:51 PM




(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!

laugh or I need to work less flowers

ok, maybe we need to speed up your work clock! bigsmile



Can you do that??? :banana:

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 09:52 PM

Nope,,,I'd say its not just fiction Art,,,for I see her,,,so clearly.
And you know what they say,,
The depth of a true writer is felt not in his fiction, but that in which he brings to life,,for us us see!..:wink: :smile:


I love you for saying that even though I just dabble a little now and again flowers

kc0003's photo
Thu 09/15/11 10:03 PM





(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!

laugh or I need to work less flowers

ok, maybe we need to speed up your work clock! bigsmile


Can you do that??? :banana:

i'll see if i can pull some strings...:wink:

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 10:05 PM






(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!

laugh or I need to work less flowers

ok, maybe we need to speed up your work clock! bigsmile


Can you do that??? :banana:

i'll see if i can pull some strings...:wink:



Love you forever! bigsmile laugh

kc0003's photo
Thu 09/15/11 10:10 PM







(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!

laugh or I need to work less flowers

ok, maybe we need to speed up your work clock! bigsmile


Can you do that??? :banana:

i'll see if i can pull some strings...:wink:



Love you forever! bigsmile laugh

whoa, public admission...and I thought it was just between us blushing blushing laugh

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/15/11 10:15 PM








(((Terry))) thank you - this is pure fiction though ... my brain just takes off on an image sometimes. Thank you for reading flowerforyou

((Up2)) - I appreciate you stopping by - thank you flowerforyou

((((Kev)))) - every once in awhile when the time and mood strike. Thank you :heart:

((Penny)) - thank you for reading and for your comments. flowerforyou

guess we need to speed up your clock!

laugh or I need to work less flowers

ok, maybe we need to speed up your work clock! bigsmile


Can you do that??? :banana:

i'll see if i can pull some strings...:wink:



Love you forever! bigsmile laugh

whoa, public admission...and I thought it was just between us blushing blushing laugh


laugh :tongue:

s1owhand's photo
Fri 09/16/11 02:37 AM

no photo
Fri 09/16/11 08:32 AM
Nice:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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