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Topic: "The Addicts"
Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/17/12 05:15 AM
The Addicts" Years of abuse, his mother, and father… Snow capped, sparkling gold… He pounds four or five an hour… Filling the void, quieting loud voices… He baptizes grey areas... Numbs magenta aches… Watching him her drug of choice… She shoots self destruction straight up.... Ices the pain of past mistakes….

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 02/17/12 06:13 AM
Ices the pain of past mistakes…. Like that last line indeed.

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Fri 02/17/12 06:25 AM
That pretty much sums it up. Awesome write.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 02/17/12 07:38 AM
Hitting the vein,,as the user's live their habits. All very pulling here Leigh, and straight to the their point.. I LOVED it,,and its such a shame to have known so many like this,,who now have passed...God bless you and all the one who you have brought here to light..

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 02/17/12 09:07 AM
Amazing write Leiigh.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/17/12 10:04 AM
Ices the pain of past mistakes…. Like that last line indeed. Thank you (((Tazz))) ....

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/17/12 10:05 AM
That pretty much sums it up. Awesome write. Thanks Totage...Codependency, such a terrible addiction...

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/17/12 10:06 AM
Hitting the vein,,as the user's live their habits. All very pulling here Leigh, and straight to the their point.. I LOVED it,,and its such a shame to have known so many like this,,who now have passed...God bless you and all the one who you have brought here to light.. Hitting the vein....brilliant way to say it Terry...Thanks for reading!!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/17/12 10:10 AM
Amazing write Leiigh. (((Penny)))...Thank you sister!!

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Fri 02/17/12 10:36 AM
That pretty much sums it up. Awesome write. Thanks Totage...Codependency, such a terrible addiction... Just as destructive as drugs.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 02/17/12 10:57 AM
That pretty much sums it up. Awesome write. Thanks Totage...Codependency, such a terrible addiction... Just as destructive as drugs. Maybe even more so Totage...for sure it is harder to identify and treat/overcome...

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Fri 02/17/12 10:59 AM
Definitely so

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 02/17/12 06:06 PM
love that, powerful leigh

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 02/18/12 04:58 AM
love that, powerful leigh Hey Bastet!! ...Thanks for comment!

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Sat 02/18/12 10:18 AM Edited by manOfewwords on Sat 02/18/12 10:18 AM
nice

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sat 02/18/12 07:34 PM
nice Thanks sugar....

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