Serenity rendered,
breaking through forgotten barriers,
reality surrendered.
sensually exploring, dawn suspended.
Emotional invasion,
trimmers radiating, bodies aching
Love's romantic persuasion.

Thanks Tazz,,this was yet me attempting new ideas of expression,,with a depth that I hope to reach,,through the readers, I appriciate your taking the time to read this...

It was my pleasure to read anything you write.

Thanks man,,and I really appreciate YOU for that..

I guess other I have many here who didn't enjoy my respect poem,,or found this to be a piece of crap...?

All I know is YOU've been my only reply all day and night so..
HEY,,if YOU liked it,,I'm good,,I just don't know if this is written in a good way as for me to try more or leave it and forget it?

But,,thanks man,,and I speak out on here for whats just kindness and honesty within all of us to have and share on here?
So,,I'm not here to make everyone like me,,just to see others heart,,and to know WE ALL NEED A SUPPORTING LIFT,,every now and then.
As folks here shall read this and see me talking,,,lol,and say,,who the hell does he think he is,,and to THAT,,I just say,,
Someone who likes to call this place,,,my neighborhood,,as I've lived on this block now for over five years and it means much to me to have,,neighbors who like to say hello, once in awhile,,
Ahhh,,REALLY TAZZ,,I just type to my self here in my writes and
no one knows,,,,, HAVE A GREAT SUNDAY MY FRIEND..

Patience, man, some of us are just waking up. . . .

The first thing I thought when I read this one was the haiku quality of it. I know it's not really a haiku at all but there's something about it that makes me think of that.

Ah Terry you've done it again. Nice work my friend. Really nice work.

i like it.

Me too!!

different for you!! :) just pops to life with perfect word choice!

Brava,,,your right,,and as I do get a bit antsy,
its my boredom mostly here,,lol,,and not knowing that IF..as to try more,,I thank you for your insight here to help me..
I had gotten involved on here about two years ago doing those haiku, style of poems,,,slowhand and Bonniemiss and three others here had posted some and we all tried doing them,,it was fun...
Thanks for your time, and reply,,

Thanks Mig,,,for reading and letting me know.

Thank you Teasin,,for giving me your time to look,and read,,,,,that means a bunch to me,,,

I'm not, me to!,,,,I am,,Iam4u....

Just pickin on ya Leigh,,thank you for reading and replying..

I just realized,,it could also break down to this as in its form,,of all two worded expressions,,,odd really,I made it and never seen this,,,lol

Thanks much Bastet,,your thoughts and inspirations
help me to grow here in style, thoughts and expressions,,
Thank YOU for all you have helped me to see...

Haha, watch out! You get to editing them and you'll never have any peace for yourself. Ask me how I know, LOL. ("Oh wait, it might be better if I did it this way . . . no, this way, oh wait, what about this?")

Before I killed them all, I had a bunch of poems I had never finished. The ones that were finished, I tried not to look at too much because every time I did, I'd want to change them.

I have grown really friendly with back space and enter,,lol Their my buds within every write,,,lol..but I never pre-write anything on here,,ever,,,I hit post a new post,,and stay there in it,,until I get it right,,then hit,,post...lol

thank you and you are welcome!! i think the fact that so many of us find inspiration in others here is what makes this writing forum really special. so thank YOU too! ~INSPIRE~

This one made me smile, always like reading you

Sorry I have not been around for a while so am catching up on all I have missed and I must confess I have missed much.

Am finding much joy and inspiration right now...

This I found was a little pocket of joy.

could not have been rounded, lessened or made any bigger, just right