what a lovely place to be.
her and he. he and them.

simpflified.

basking in the sun.
bathing under waterfalls.

no soap.
too busy enjoying life to
think otherwise.

drugs a thing of the future.
to relieve and relive.

necessarily unneccessary, as i see.

the best cliche i can think of is,
"its all in the head."
the most basic truth i have
ever thought of.

the simplest life.

stressless and obedient.

yet jealousy slithered.
but how?
and even more questionably pondered,
why?
why was this allowed.

why is there one tree?
with one rule?

who did this?

i think about this sometimes..

when im searching for peace i go
to the beginning.

the only conclusion remains..

if it was not for that tree
none of this would be real.

we would not know how good
we have it or how bad it can
get. and/or visa-verse.

if it were not for one serpent
of persuasion; life could have lived
forever as just him and just she.

and thank god this was not the case
or there would be no need for our existence.

you and i could have been obsolete.
thank god, we can say that.

but all things change.


it is the serpent that taught us
these emotions..

where did this serpent learn this from?

where did the end of a perfect world, begin?

i will never be a year younger.

every life is imperfect.

overwelmed is putting this lightly.

the most complex of all animals
must eat, sleep, and breahe.

just as any other.

making us not only the most complex.
also, the most highly sophisticated animals.

wondering how a serpent of less adversity
could influence us by impacting such negative
emotions

still i wonder..

how did such a serpent feel jealousy
altering good intentions.

and when he fell, why did he have to land
in a perfect world?

my conclusion: this is the story of humanity.

created by thee unseen.

manipulated by a talking serpent
to define our existence filled with emotions.

is this the truth?

that i do not know for certain..

but i do find it conforting
to have something to believe in.

Sssstupid Ssssnake. <@@@@@@@@@@*>~ Nice write!

Hey d4tc! Long time no read...
Welcome back!

A very nice poem
and good food for thought .

glad to see you back here, missed your style! ;)