Topic: Adieu
PMcClatchy's photo
Mon 01/07/13 08:28 PM
You acted like you loved me
Maybe you did for a while.
But now
You've gone away in style.

I loved you
I cared for you.
I was making so many plans for us
What does He have that I don't?

Well,
You said its over.
So I'm not taking you back
I'm not gonna
You can't make me crack.

You cheated me

Now,
You're out on the streets.
You're on your own.

There.
I said it.
Wow.
That felt good.
And now I bid you
Adieu.

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Tue 01/08/13 03:07 AM
Wow.. guess the rug got pulled out sooner than I thought...
I like your "could care less" stand...

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PMcClatchy's photo
Fri 01/18/13 04:45 PM
haha it seems that way. but this one was written after the other one "The Game of Love." and about a completely different relationship.

Solace84's photo
Sat 01/19/13 12:18 AM
Splendid!

ezbn's photo
Mon 01/21/13 04:26 PM
ADIEU
Francis CARCO
La bohème et mon coeur, 1912
Si l’humble cabaret, noirci
Par la pluie et le vent d’automne,
M’accueille, tu n’es plus ici...
Je souffre et l’amour m’abandonne.

Je souffre affreusement. Le jour
Où tu partis, j’appris à rire.
J’ai depuis pleuré, sans l’amour,
Et vécu tristement ma vie.

Au moins, garde le souvenir,
Garde mon cœur, berce ma peine !
Chéris cette tendresse ancienne
Qui voulut, blessée, en finir.

Je rirai contre une autre épaule,
D’autres baisers me suffiront,
Je les marquerai de mes dents.
Mais tu resteras la plus belle...

ezbn's photo
Mon 01/21/13 07:47 PM
Edited by ezbn on Mon 01/21/13 08:05 PM
ADIEU

La bohème and my heart, 1912
If the humble tavern, blackened
By the wind and rain of autumn
Welcomes me, you're no longer here ...
I suffer and love abandons me.

I suffer terribly. day
Where you left, I learned to laugh.
I cried since, without love,
And sadly lived my life.

At least, remembers,
Guard my heart, soothes my pain!
Cherish this old tenderness
Who wanted to, hurt, finish.

I laugh against another shoulder
Other kisses me enough,
I shall mark of my teeth.
But you remain the most beautiful ...

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Mon 01/21/13 10:50 PM
Liked this write PMcClatchy...

PMcClatchy's photo
Tue 01/22/13 03:36 PM
Thanks Ainjel :)