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Topic: winter solstice
bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Thu 02/07/13 05:15 PM
she walked on glass disguised as solid ground. he held her hand as shards cut deep. she wrapped in bandages all his faults, the only thing left to let go of. ks - 2013

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Thu 02/07/13 07:01 PM
Thank ye for "Winter Solstice" bastet. I loved it - a lot! Very brief,very meaningful. I like your style. As I, you write short sonnets and things. This pleases your poet! tommy boy PS: Please allow this message to be in response to your last. ==

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 02/07/13 07:27 PM
she walked on glass disguised as solid ground. he held her hand as shards cut deep. she wrapped in bandages all his faults, the only thing left to let go of. ks - 2013 [[[Bastet]]] A sad state of affairs so beautifully packaged!...I love your work, don't make us wait so long the next time...Cheeky kiss for you beauty

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Thu 02/07/13 07:54 PM
Gee i am still trying to decide on my interpretation Of your piece It is short but ponderous And i enjoy the think in it... Well spoken KiK

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1532	Thu 02/07/13 08:45 PM
she walked on glass disguised as solid ground. he held her hand as shards cut deep. she wrapped in bandages all his faults, the only thing left to let go of. ks - 2013 To me, poetry should make you think, make you wonder and/or to see the picture the words paint. You my dear bas have accomplished all three with this short but very deep piece of art.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 02/07/13 09:11 PM
dammit, why don't you post more often? or at least email them to me...

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Fri 02/08/13 12:16 AM
she walked on glass disguised as solid ground. he held her hand as shards cut deep. she wrapped in bandages all his faults, the only thing left to let go of. ks - 2013 I can feel the deepest love in this frailty... you're a beautiful soul, bastet, thank you for letting us see...

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 02/08/13 05:31 PM Edited by bastet126 on Fri 02/08/13 05:32 PM
i curtsy, especially in the presence of writers i admire so much. thank you all for your thoughtful comments, i appreciate you very much.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 02/08/13 05:53 PM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 02/08/13 08:33 PM
Excellent write.....

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Fri 02/08/13 10:19 PM
Holding her hand as she bleeds, blood he's causing. Appears to be helping but really hurting. Beautiful.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 02/09/13 06:46 AM
stunning in its simplicity

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Sat 02/09/13 02:32 PM
beautiful

DaySinner Joined Sat 11/17/12 Posts: 558	Sat 02/09/13 10:54 PM
love like suicide. powerful

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Tue 02/12/13 05:41 PM
thank you one and all, i am truly grateful, truly! :)

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