Topic: Suddenly
mig25's photo
Wed 02/13/13 02:52 AM
Suddenly

I was waiting at the bus stop
as winter danced around me
when a rush
of cold wind
caused my body shiver
I pulled at my coat
to shake of the chilled breath of mother nature
while turning away from the wind

And
there you were

Suddenly
the sun’s ray
seemed to fight through the wind
and the world didn’t feel as cold
it was something about your smile
something about
the look in your eyes
that turned
a dark
cold
bleak
winter day
into a warm
bright
spring afternoon


lucnewcastle's photo
Wed 02/13/13 03:31 AM
WOW this was really well put together

Solace84's photo
Wed 02/13/13 03:51 AM
Splendid...like that...

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Wed 02/13/13 04:34 AM
nice visual, mig... that first moment when... :heart:

Teditis's photo
Wed 02/13/13 10:10 AM
Very nice Mig...

oldhippie1952's photo
Wed 02/13/13 11:05 AM
Love at first sight!

Givemyheart2U's photo
Wed 02/13/13 12:46 PM
:heart: heartfelt and warm

woznotwoz's photo
Wed 02/13/13 03:20 PM
another fine piece smokin

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Wed 02/13/13 04:16 PM
... :heart: ...

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Thu 02/14/13 08:37 PM
Ironically this recently happened to me.smokin
Seems you captured the moment on literature film...drinker
Awesome moment & write....smokin :thumbsup: