Topic: dial that number
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Sat 07/20/13 04:40 PM
woke up this morning
and decided to call
got your name and your number
pinned to my wall
it's been there now
for almost a year
maybe I'm finally
over my fear

I see your letters
I read your words
they are compelling
with nothing absurd
they make me wonder
what you are about
might dial this number
and give you a shout

oh the dreams
I've had in my head
all the words
that I want to be said
the life in my mind
made for you and for me
if I dial that number
maybe I'll see

to me your pretty
and I know you are kind
imagine love with you
would be sublime
you got that smile
that turns on the lights
this can't be wrong
cause you make it so right

oh the dreams
I've had in my head
all the words
that I want to be said
the life in my mind
made for you and for me
if I dial that number
maybe I'll see

all those lonely times could come to an end
if I could tell you your more than a friend
sometimes I'm thinking and maybe it will be
that I'll choose you and you'll choose me

well I'm thinking about it
getting kind of scared
I'm a little shy
and not to be dared
might keep that number
right there on this wall
you never know
maybe you'll call

the day passed me by
seems I lost my nerve
think I failed this test
on the love teacher's curve
always tomorrow
it's another day
even if I called you
wouldn't know how to say

oh the dreams
I've had in my head
all the words
that I want to be said
the life in my mind
made for you and for me
didn't dial that number
so may never see

didn't dial that number
so I may never see

...and the phone rings
so

maybe we'll see

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Sat 07/20/13 05:06 PM
Love it Michael! What is cool is I hear this to a melody in my head as I read. Did you write it as a song?

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Sat 07/20/13 05:19 PM
Phones ringin' ...
drinker
Like it Mg !
good one

pkh's photo
Sat 07/20/13 05:50 PM
Loved it, great write

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Sun 07/21/13 01:02 AM
Awesome write MG . flowerforyou

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Sun 07/21/13 03:49 AM
drinker drinker drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 07/21/13 05:26 AM
Sweet :-)

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Sun 07/21/13 12:21 PM
Thanks so much guys!

Yep Art, this is a song I started writing while in the shower funny enough (good acoustics lol) and had to hurry to my computer to lay it down. When I write songs they usually pop out pretty quick. Kinda fun to sing and put instrument parts to them while writing.

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Sun 07/21/13 09:22 PM

Thanks so much guys!

Yep Art, this is a song I started writing while in the shower funny enough (good acoustics lol) and had to hurry to my computer to lay it down. When I write songs they usually pop out pretty quick. Kinda fun to sing and put instrument parts to them while writing.


That is awesome. Songs pop in my head in the shower too ... I wish I was musical to capture their essence...alas ... they float away on the soap bubbles in search of more capable ears.

I'd love to hear it when you have it down. flowerforyou