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Edited by
JRonin
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Sat 10/26/13 08:46 PM
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You are in the center of the stage,
looking resolute and confident prepping for the physical ordeal or the rampant exhiliration in your red flowy dress and velvet shoes The melodies of the guitarist below you plays somewhat of an Andalusian riff ebbing and flowing with your hands which do a kind of windmill, flowy gesture a graceful flourish Then all grace is trumped by an urgency, the movements, at first slow are now rapid, furious and mesmerizing a jump here, a kick there, subtle cadences and looks and kinetic display All you do is move and move and move and move and move then stop your angelical paces for a moment as the dance ends, your body crouching coming to a stop on the lucky gentlemean in the front row. He smiles, blushing. He is able to catch you wink just before your head comes down and the guitar player ends his heated melody. The crowd claps. You rise, smiling, your face and torso flushed with sweat from the workout of the flamenco dance you expertly performed. Minutes pass and you are at my side, in normal clothing, hanging onto my arm with the fervor of your successful night, beaming happily as we make our way across the street to our favorite sushi bar. The man in the front row you winked at was me. I am fortunate to have you, my fiery ardent flame, my lush flamenco princess whose smile lights my heart in thousand different ways only to blush when i call her beautiful. I love the way she blushes. I compliment her again, on her dancing, so full of grace and precision and ardor. she whispers in my ear how much of that ardor has been left aside, for another kind of dance. One with candles, a cooperative spirit, two glasses of wine, and behind closed doors before the sun rises. (Thanks for reading. comments encouraged and appreciated) |
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Lovely as usual! A few words misspelled but the thought conveyed is wonderful!
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Lovely as usual! A few words misspelled but the thought conveyed is wonderful! ![]() ![]() Noted, fixed! And thank you! ![]() |
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Loved it
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Loved it as always
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