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Topic: Park After Dark
dani69582 Joined Fri 01/04/13 Posts: 12	Mon 02/24/14 08:31 PM
Fragments of life Lie strewn Upon the ground, Amongst shards Of memories Scattered all around. Like puzzle piece To long lost To ever be found, Or, Another voice, Robbed of sound.

Fracus16 Joined Tue 12/31/13 Posts: 104	Mon 02/24/14 09:00 PM
Daaaaang dani!!! I like that!!! No by line? So it's yours?

dani69582 Joined Fri 01/04/13 Posts: 12	Mon 02/24/14 10:15 PM
Thank you Fracus!!! It's definitely mine. And, I definitely appreciate your feedback!!! : )

no1phD Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 27442	Mon 02/24/14 10:18 PM
can you hear the echo of my silent tears.... .. that was nice thank you.

dani69582 Joined Fri 01/04/13 Posts: 12	Mon 02/24/14 10:28 PM
Thank you! It's always nice when someone takes the time to give you their feed back. :-)

rapsscallion Joined Thu 11/22/12 Posts: 355	Tue 02/25/14 12:26 AM
I really like your poem, it becomes part of, and stimulates my imagination.

dani69582 Joined Fri 01/04/13 Posts: 12	Tue 02/25/14 03:00 AM
Thank you, Rapsscallion. It's nice to know that others enjoy my poem. :-)

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