Topic: O' Winterbourne. Dry streams In a Daybed Calling . . .
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Thu 04/10/14 05:37 AM
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O' Winterbourne. Dry streams In a Daybed Calling . . .( tommy boy moran / Ireland )


Word games
Word play
It is indeed this course I choose today

( . . . Nothing more or less different from
Yesterday )

Cold, empty and dry daybed,
Your stream is the essence and true issuance
Of your standing in tempered stead

Ah, to be You, Winterbourne! Out from the chalky depths held in by summer!
Flow ye now, out from nature's seasonal thunder!
In winter ye flow strongest, flow ye now free in your
Gentle blowing winter's decree!

Dance on thimbles, dance on stone,
Balance erect upon your throne
Dance carefully here atop my needle's point,

For it is now, O' Winterbourne, on this very day, I do thee anoint.

O' Winterbourne, how I do love thee.


tommy boy moran / Ireland - 2014

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Thu 04/10/14 05:43 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Thu 04/10/14 05:48 AM
Thank ye, tazzops. You da man! smokin

tommy boy

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Sat 04/12/14 10:29 AM
Impressive. :)

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Sun 04/13/14 12:34 AM
red_lace,

Thanks for your input. So glad ye found this piece impressive. Your so nice.

Stay sweet. :heart:

tommy boy moran / Ireland.

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Sun 04/13/14 07:36 AM
flowerforyou
fanciful
i like it very much

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Sun 04/13/14 07:41 AM
Your words painted a lovely picture in my mind and when I closed my eyes I could smell the clean spring air and hear the babbling brook calling my name....You are so good at what you do ((((Tomo))))flowers

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Sun 04/13/14 09:36 AM
Aye. Tommyboy, you have indeed captured the image of a precocious river. Question: is it that you desire to "dance on thimbles, dance on stone/Balance erect upon your throne..."?
(Those are my favorite lines!)

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Mon 04/14/14 03:22 AM
beautiful that :cry: emotional

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Mon 04/14/14 08:03 AM
As always, love to read your writings. Great play on words.

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Tue 04/15/14 12:50 AM
Thanks, all. Appreciate your enriching comments. This was to say the least a brief array.

tommy boy moran / " The Island "

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