Topic: ~Can't Let You See Me Cry~
ellgee1976's photo
Sun 10/29/06 12:32 AM
if you could have known
how badly it hurt
that you think I've thrown
this love to the dirt

i want to feel you
your skin on mine
every inch of you
and then stop time

how i long for touch
soft breath on my skin
you can't know of such
so i keep it in

it's safer this way
not let you inside
if i did convey
you'd run fast and hide

so i push them down
my thoughts of what if
you can't come around
so why keep with this

although truth be told
'cause i can not lie
my heart is not bold
can't let you see me cry

Tuesday, May 14, 2006

hippie's photo
Sun 10/29/06 12:45 AM
ellgee; u need to publish

ellgee1976's photo
Mon 10/30/06 02:07 PM
thnx hippie, dunno if im ready for that tho ;)

michael1313's photo
Tue 10/31/06 12:11 AM
you mean to tell me you wrote this moving poem back in may and you have
not published it?????
why?

ellgee1976's photo
Tue 10/31/06 09:56 AM
umm..no, not published..

prolly cuz i wrote it during a fairly dark time...

it was inner thoughts that i couldn't tell "him"

escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:01 AM
ok elgee ..i'm inspired...i'lll write one, log the time we'll see how
long this takes

ellgee1976's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:12 AM
ok lunatic...it's 12:12 my time right now


hope i've helped somehow ;)

LG

escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:15 AM
about half way through ...give me a few......no that wasn't on purpose
lol

ellgee1976's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:16 AM
lmao

michael1313's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:20 AM
well I thought it was smurffy!

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:27 AM
Well must say I do agree with the others in here
you should publish a book you are very good with
your words. For they do move the heart and tug on
the heart strings for all the times we have something
to say to the one that we love but the words just don't
seem to come out for us to tell them.