Topic: lol ok (no name and unfinished lol)
escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:27 AM
Its said that in our lives pain is motivation,
But I cant seem to get past the fruatration,
that comes from trusting someone and losing all.

I sit here with my emotions shattered,
feeling like my soul has been tattered,
waiting patiently for the next shoe to fall.

My inside's scream she could be the one,
but I'm still shy from the smoking gun,
so i sit and watch another love pass by.

You say I can trust you and you smile,
and its probably true for a little while,
but I just cant seem make myself try.

Well now you see my delima indeed,
please help me in my time of need,
there must be something that I can do.

I'm trapped within this evil spell,
My trust is gone, my love is frail,
so far away from what I once knew.

escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:29 AM
i really should have done this under an asummed identity lol

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:50 AM
Now all joking aside this is good esape, I know you hit the post running
like a wild man making jokes and you do have the knack to make us all
laugh. But aww this now shows a whole different side of you. The poem is
very good indeed you should write more.

escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:52 AM
what side would that be...lol....
are you trying to imply that i have multiple personalities?

escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 10/31/06 10:53 AM
jk...thanks...its not to bad for a 5 mnute poem lol

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/31/06 11:02 AM
Lmao multiple personality ohhhhhhh nooo would never tell ya secrets. lol


And for a 5 min man I'm still impressed lol

escapedlunatic's photo
Tue 10/31/06 11:06 AM
oh......look.....i thought they were exstinct.....a woman with wit

ellgee1976's photo
Tue 10/31/06 11:24 AM
hey 5 minutes isn't bad either..

hard to beat a good wall pin, a passionate quickie...


ok..wrong thread...

very good lunatic...and ty, im not alone ;)

LG