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Topic: Immortal Kiss (Ode to a Vampire)
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Fri 11/23/07 12:12 PM
Oh come to me with blood lust
driven hungry desires~
Let my woman scented charms
as I lay in your arms, stoke
your simmering blood thirsty fires~
Let your hungry mouth bury
deep into this fleshly feast
as you partake and savor
that which you yearn,
ache and burn for....
Lay me out bare,
a willing player,
in this game of life or death~
Indulge yourself in this
silken sensual banquet,
aromatic and seasoned
for your discriminating palate~
Quench your thirst deeply,
caress me hotly, sweetly,
as you drink from me,
my honeyed nectar flowing
from this golden chalice;
your holy grail~
Bring me shuddering near
to the deep deathly abyss,
as my eyes glaze and close
in a warm dreamlike bliss~
Satisfy that starved fatal need,
as I call out your name,
writhe, moan and bleed
against your lips so soft,
so cool as they entice, ignite,
tease and delight my senses~
Mesmerize me,
I will call you my master,
brand me as yours,
suckle me faster ...
harder ... deeper~.
Bleed me...need me ...
Satisfy that impassioned urge,
as you gorge yourself on
the throat which you purge,
of blood; red hot sparked life
engulfing,washing over you in
warm, sensual waves of pleasure~
Your body shudders and trembles
in exquisite bliss,
and you rise from me,
infused and renewed
by this ...
... our Immortal Kiss~

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Fri 11/23/07 12:22 PM
Most beautiful and sensual words - very romantic! flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Fri 11/23/07 12:23 PM

Most beautiful and sensual words - very romantic! flowerforyou flowerforyou


Thank you roadie....flowerforyou

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Fri 11/23/07 12:28 PM
Wow.

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Fri 11/23/07 12:29 PM
I hope that's a good wow...? flowerforyou

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Fri 11/23/07 12:29 PM
Yeah. That's a cool poem.

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Fri 11/23/07 12:30 PM

Yeah. That's a cool poem.


thank you....:heart:

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Fri 11/23/07 12:31 PM
You're welcome. happy

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Fri 11/23/07 12:52 PM
flowerforyou

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Fri 11/23/07 04:30 PM

flowerforyou


Thank you arian...flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 11/23/07 05:25 PM
Covering my neck...
Good discriptive poem!
flowerforyou

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Fri 11/23/07 05:36 PM

Covering my neck...
Good discriptive poem!
flowerforyou


Thank you darling...shall I send you some Kevlar?

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 11/23/07 06:51 PM
You make getting bit on the neck sensuous...that was really good. I'm not a vampire, but will a werewolf do?

s1owhand's photo
Fri 11/23/07 08:27 PM
for a moment i lift my face
pungent elongated drops dripping
in two places
one longer than the other
from my upper lip
twin small slowly pulsating blood fountains
like twin geysers
beat to the rhythm of her bleeding heart
in stylized violence

emerging at her throat
from whence an unnaturally hungry mouth
has briefly loosed its suckling grasp
with two long hot licks one over each opening

another agonizingly slow drip falls from
the slow motion high speed cinematographic dreams
of Quentin Tarantino
the dazed tongue of the aggressor too indolent
to catch the refugee droplet
it swirls greedily in vain
ultimately it will not be denied

she still tingles there like
fully engorged breasts of hot life
she leaks for me desperately
needing pressure and suction and pressure and suction

with a gentle nudge she cannot resist
lust drunk as he nuzzles her
neck aside again aspiring to satiation

while soft full lips
delicately and expertly pursed
move in time with a sliding tongue

he will for forever
pull her personal juice forth
to mutual delight

:tongue: flowerforyou

crimsonphoenix's photo
Sat 11/24/07 05:15 AM
drinker great job! one of the best poems in awhile, good imagery,length, passion and flow.

wanna go for a bite?blushing :tongue:

s1owhand's photo
Sat 11/24/07 06:11 AM
tasty :tongue:

but i still hunger for more.....bigsmile

no_psychos_please's photo
Sat 11/24/07 06:33 AM
Suddenly......... I'm hungry! :wink: bigsmile

Hi sweetie! Missin ya bunches :cry:

:heart: smooched :heart:

songstress1's photo
Sat 11/24/07 01:12 PM
VERY ROMANTIC, sensuous..
Got me caught up in it.

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Sat 11/24/07 06:28 PM

You make getting bit on the neck sensuous...that was really good. I'm not a vampire, but will a werewolf do?


Depends on how hard you bite....

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Sat 11/24/07 06:29 PM

for a moment i lift my face
pungent elongated drops dripping
in two places
one longer than the other
from my upper lip
twin small slowly pulsating blood fountains
like twin geysers
beat to the rhythm of her bleeding heart
in stylized violence

emerging at her throat
from whence an unnaturally hungry mouth
has briefly loosed its suckling grasp
with two long hot licks one over each opening

another agonizingly slow drip falls from
the slow motion high speed cinematographic dreams
of Quentin Tarantino
the dazed tongue of the aggressor too indolent
to catch the refugee droplet
it swirls greedily in vain
ultimately it will not be denied

she still tingles there like
fully engorged breasts of hot life
she leaks for me desperately
needing pressure and suction and pressure and suction

with a gentle nudge she cannot resist
lust drunk as he nuzzles her
neck aside again aspiring to satiation

while soft full lips
delicately and expertly pursed
move in time with a sliding tongue

he will for forever
pull her personal juice forth
to mutual delight

:tongue: flowerforyou



Excellent!!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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