rate my profile...

yeah

A bit more about what you're looking for in a mate. Additionally, I would reword the existing text to not appear so vulnerable. It seems clear you're a sweetheart, but people do take advantage... Just stick to the facts.

a 9 body idk about face

because ur asian id rate u an 8 but you are really pretty

It's good for a person to love themselves.. but I felt your profile was more about your self proclaim of self-love and how your able to love someone.

I suggest highlighting more about your interests, things you do in your spare time etc..

I gave it a quick read and I could tell you that I would send you a message if you were in my area mostly because I like the way you look and you gave several pictures. I read through your description and it was great to get all the details about you (and I can say way too many people don't do that). What is missing is what you want. What are the attributes of the person you want to meet? What are your boundaries and things you will not accept?
If you make that balance without being too wordy (by the way I think your current description is too long), then you will not be able to answer all the guys trying to track you down!