Hi

Hey there, Valurie

Over all it seems fine, has photos and you bothered to write a bit. I think the only thing is you could write a little more. But I've seen lots of people on here say that most do not read the profiles.

TBH I'm probably the worst person to give feedback on a profile. Considering I usually just write what I'm thinking. Try to be honest and not fashion my words in a way that attempts to persuade the opposite sex. I'm aware mine is not enticing.

If you would read mine and give your absolute honest opinion, every possible insight, I would highly appreciate it. Be brutally honest.

Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth. --Henry David Thoreau

Add some interests, maybe a little more of what you're looking for here... then I think it'd be good..

vlurie,
it's a good start but the most common and agreed advice is smile,
tell us about you, tell us about who you are looking for and finally avoid adding negatives.

good start keep adding to it



absolute start your own thread to be rated in

And don't put a big ole fish in front of you while smiling from ear to ear... seems M2 gods frown on that..lol