Topic: My love
Xotic_Blue_Eyes's photo
Sat 10/21/17 11:37 PM
My love came to me in a dream
Masquerading in a tormenting scene
Disguised as my heaven disguised as my queen
Your not real and still i feel your terrible squeeze
Your the breath in my life your the reason i breathe
I hate that i love you and your everything i need
Your my downfall and yet everything i seek
You came prancing to me a sweet vixen with eerisome wings
A molevalent beast my host my blood my fiend

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Fri 11/10/17 07:44 AM
Solid write!

Thanks for sharing...

Stu's photo
Fri 11/10/17 08:06 AM
:thumbsup:

Excellent poem...

Ladywind7's photo
Sat 11/11/17 03:45 AM
Beautiful. Expresses the vulnerability and dread we have of being in love, for to become one, we have to give up being our own keeper.