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Edited by
justmenoel
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Sun 12/09/07 03:55 PM
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she stares out the window, wishing you were near
but the only thing that reflects is her breath upon the glass she misses you so much sometimes, and wonders why you cant be here her voice and her cries are the only sound that is now heard you didnt come for her like you promised, her emotions are erotically stirred she looked to you to become that hero sheso greatly needed the one to take her away from the pain, but you did nothing but feed it she lies awake at night,she wonders do you do the same or are you out there living a life, while she silently drowns, and you enjoy the fame she heartbroken now, has no hope or desire to even move on she feels empty inside, and realizes you're forever gone she lays breathless, weak, and her heart feels nothing at all she'd love to be strong, and shake it off, but she cant even crawl she wants answers, but doesnt even know what the questions to ask should even be for if she was someone else right now she would laugh and dance, just to feel and be free but she lies, lies to everyone about the tears that fill her dark brown stained eyes for if she had a chance, she would just choose to forget and die but when she walks to the mirror the reflection that looks back at her isnt what she feels inside the woman that looks back, is a woman who has stregnth, and wont let her spirit die so she take a deep breath, and exhales real slow thats when she realizes, she has now come full circle, she has let you go. |
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Very Powerful...have you been reading my mind?
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Very Powerful...have you been reading my mind? i dunno...but have def been her |
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It's a beautiful piece: yearning, love, loss, lost, pain, strength, spiritual, renew. Thank you for sharing.
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ty roadie...appreciate your comments
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another beautiful one
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ty roadie...appreciate your comments The pleasure was all mine. |
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another beautiful one thank you love |
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very true...great poem
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Beautiful words my friend very well done
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Beautiful words my friend very well done
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Beautiful words my friend very well done ty |
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