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Unknow · 2019-12-12T14:22:01-08:00

How I let you go, You were the shine, In my lifeless existing life, You were the rock, The solid support I felt, I needed to survive, Your beauty and rarity, So hard to find, In this world full of fakes, And lack-luster selfish minds, Were you for real, Or was I building dreams made of sand, In the end, all I can say, Whoever you are, You were a diamond, I once held in my hands.

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Topic: Diamond in my hands
Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Thu 12/12/19 02:22 PM
How I let you go, You were the shine, In my lifeless existing life, You were the rock, The solid support I felt, I needed to survive, Your beauty and rarity, So hard to find, In this world full of fakes, And lack-luster selfish minds, Were you for real, Or was I building dreams made of sand, In the end, all I can say, Whoever you are, You were a diamond, I once held in my hands.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3763	Fri 12/13/19 01:47 AM
Nice poem .

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Fri 12/13/19 11:37 AM
Nice poem . Thanks

Queenie Joined Thu 04/26/18 Posts: 16001	Tue 12/31/19 09:47 AM
Nice poem

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Wed 01/01/20 11:12 AM
Nice poem Thanks

mysticalview21 Joined Sat 06/28/14 Posts: 5462	Sat 01/11/20 06:44 AM
very felt ... hope you find them again

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Sat 01/25/20 10:36 PM
very felt ... hope you find them again Thank you

Unknow Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 64077	Wed 02/19/20 05:07 PM
I liked this a lot. Thanks for sharing.

Unknow Joined Mon 04/22/19 Posts: 150	Wed 02/19/20 10:29 PM
I liked this a lot. Thanks for sharing. Thank you and glad you liked

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