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Topic: Fire and Smoke
Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Tue 01/21/20 09:04 PM
Born of ancient fire, her smoke signals summon primal war howls. An uprising of razor sharp arrows pierce the clouded mountaintop, where it is said she abides. Smoke and mist pass. The mountain is barren, only skeletons of yesteryear remain, untouched, entombed near the ashes. And the thousand arrowheads broken, their shafts used to kindle her fire.

mysticalview21 Joined Sat 06/28/14 Posts: 5462	Wed 01/22/20 06:47 AM
Born of ancient fire, her smoke signals summon primal war howls. An uprising of razor sharp arrows pierce the clouded mountaintop, where it is said she abides. Smoke and mist pass. The mountain is barren, only skeletons of yesteryear remain, untouched, entombed near the ashes. And the thousand arrowheads broken, their shafts used to kindle her fire. deep ...love that

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3165	Wed 01/22/20 08:19 AM
Nice poem .

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Wed 01/22/20 05:00 PM
Thank you ladies. I wrote it for my sister who needed to be reminded she is strong.

Bastet127 Joined Wed 06/12/19 Posts: 967	Wed 01/22/20 05:22 PM
oh I like this a lot!! Ending was spot on :)

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Wed 01/22/20 05:30 PM
Powerful! I enjoyed reading your poem, Ladywind

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Wed 01/22/20 08:31 PM
oh I like this a lot!! Ending was spot on :) Thank you gorgeous

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Wed 01/22/20 08:33 PM
Powerful! I enjoyed reading your poem, Ladywind Thank you very much

Flickering Rays Joined Thu 01/23/20 Posts: 1	Fri 01/24/20 06:28 AM
A beautiful poem, picturesque and thoughtful.

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1525	Fri 01/24/20 09:53 PM
Born of ancient fire, her smoke signals summon primal war howls. An uprising of razor sharp arrows pierce the clouded mountaintop, where it is said she abides. Smoke and mist pass. The mountain is barren, only skeletons of yesteryear remain, untouched, entombed near the ashes. And the thousand arrowheads broken, their shafts used to kindle her fire. Wow Ladywind you continue to amaze me!

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 01/25/20 03:46 AM
A beautiful poem, picturesque and thoughtful. Thank you.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Sat 01/25/20 03:47 AM
Born of ancient fire, her smoke signals summon primal war howls. An uprising of razor sharp arrows pierce the clouded mountaintop, where it is said she abides. Smoke and mist pass. The mountain is barren, only skeletons of yesteryear remain, untouched, entombed near the ashes. And the thousand arrowheads broken, their shafts used to kindle her fire. Wow Ladywind you continue to amaze me! Wow Mig you continue to amaze me!

LaraSparkles Joined Fri 02/15/19 Posts: 12	Mon 02/10/20 06:15 PM
loved it!

Seamus Joined Mon 07/15/19 Posts: 3365	Tue 02/11/20 03:53 AM
Beautiful poem, loved it .

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Tue 02/11/20 02:14 PM
loved it! Thank you.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Tue 02/11/20 02:15 PM
Beautiful poem, loved it . Thank you Seamus

Pappu Singh Joined Tue 02/11/20 Posts: 1	Wed 02/12/20 06:49 PM
Beautiful poem, loved it . Thank you Seamus

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Fri 02/14/20 09:48 AM
An expression that exemplifies formidable strength.

Mutha Brah Joined Sat 02/15/20 Posts: 6	Sat 02/15/20 12:54 PM
good one 🤙

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