Topic: The Light
pumpilicious ๐Ÿ’•'s photo
Sat 03/14/20 05:57 AM
You drove the stake in my worst mistake
Now I'm the one left alone
Brought out the evil that's the devil in me
And now I'm on my own inside the dark unknown
You told the lie you believed in me
Lights dimming low lost the glow
You are the sin and so sinister
I'm just the soul you owe
The who you left unwhole
You were the anger in all my danger
Old habits keep me this cold
You killed the light that enlightened me
My ark of dark afloat, now I've lost all my hope
The spoiled child among all the children
The troll controlling me
You are the ire that fueled my fire
Stab my stability, I'm my worst enemy

Riverspirit1111's photo
Sat 03/14/20 06:02 AM
Beautiful and profound, thank you pumpi flowerforyou

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Sat 03/14/20 06:18 AM
*chills*

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technovative's photo
Sat 03/14/20 10:08 AM
A talented and meaningful poem, pumpi. I appreciate how you were able to take a segment from one word in most lines, that separately is a word itself, and use it comprehensively in the same line.

pumpilicious ๐Ÿ’•'s photo
Sat 03/14/20 02:41 PM
I won't take credit for this, this is song lyrics from Chad Grey from Mudvayne. I thought the words were beautiful & am glad you liked it too.โค

https://youtu.be/QocdrkcSdAw

But I do relate to a lot of his music on a personal level. Much of his very deep lyrics go overlooked because it's metal.

JulieABush's photo
Sun 03/15/20 02:00 AM
Thought provoking and nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Thu 03/19/20 12:02 AM
You are the ire that fueled my fire