Topic: In the edge of the silence
fee_sombre's photo
Wed 07/01/20 06:07 PM
The things about you that greet me
In the corner of my bedroom
In creamy solar gauze:
The feet steeped in brine
The roses you find saccharine;
Make a shibari out of time
And hang me in a pause.

technovative's photo
Wed 07/01/20 07:17 PM
I like the phrasing and rhyme scheme you've used here.

JulieABush's photo
Thu 07/02/20 02:07 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .