Hi guys,

Could you review my profile and give me your thoughts on its content.

Thanks and have a good day..

Dave

1) Formal request for a profile review is kind of cool

2) Married guy on a dating site not so good

3) Admitting you're married is honest

4) Your first sentence is an oxymoron

5) You are trying to be charming in your essay, but it comes across as a bit obnoxious and arrogant (just my opinion the ladies might see it differently).

6) Photos are okay

7) You might want to add something about the type of woman you're seeking unless you're just casting a wide net. If that's the case, never mind.

Second picture is odd. It didn't do anything for me. Why, why, why are you mentioning money?? Is that necessary?? Are you a sugar daddy? I mean... WTH??
Your magic talk is nonsensical and childish. Be more honest and relatable. What kind of woman are you looking for besides one who is discreet and doesn't care that you're married? What kind of qualities do you seek? What are some things you'd like to do in your time together?

Thank you for your feedback. I will review my profile and make adjustments in line with your recommendation.

This lady says most of what I would have observed and is sound advice

I would redo the whole write up because you mention you are discreet. That tells me you are married and just want action on the side because you did not answer the marital question and you say you are looking for an intimate encounter. That alone will be enough for a lot of ladies to bypass your profile.
Everything after DISCLAIMER is pointless to say in a writeup because scammers do not care what you write in your write up. They will not listen. Honest and real girls will not ask for money so why put that in there?
It is also pointless to say you only want inquires from lady's in the Sydney area. Fakers will disregard that and you could still get messages from a lot further away unless you set your mail filters. Even then you could still get unwanted messages because the ladies that are not real will change their profile to make it look like they are where you are and then send you a message.